Reviews for Sweet Addiction: Just One Touch |
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Nicole Deming chapter 1 . 9/30/2007 I love the story update soon! |
Sweetly Sarcastic chapter 11 . 9/29/2007 that was too short! update soon please! |
Chelseamuffin chapter 11 . 9/29/2007 I'm still in love with how in like Evan is with Ava. He may not realize it, but the jealousy for Ava towards Hunter was already there, when he decided that he'd try to keep Hunter away from her. (In case I haven't already told you, I squealed at that.) More about squealing- I was about to sign off and go get some, you know, sleep, when I got the email for this update. Of course, I, being the person that I am, let out an epic squeal. It's like a squeal that's so big it's epic. (And that, ladies and gentlemen, is a Chelsea-description- thank you.) So yes, short though it was, it was still an update, which is *always* made of win. So, of course, I await your next update for anything of yours that I've already R&R'd, as well as anything that I can in the future. |
urjellingcauseimevil chapter 10 . 9/28/2007 ah evan..*swoon* update soon if u please. actually no. even if u dont please. we r siamese if u please du dud dud dud we r siamsese if u dont please. thanks for bringing that classic disney song in my head;) |
nadinerdrgz chapter 10 . 9/10/2007 aw they going out lol nice im likeing your story |
Sweetly Sarcastic chapter 10 . 9/9/2007 so with evan it seems that denial is more than a river in egypt... oh, and i meant she can't even be like a normal allie- she has to go and spell her name weird. anyway, please update soon! |
Guest chapter 10 . 9/9/2007 cant wait to read whats next!:D |
givelifeyurall chapter 10 . 9/9/2007 aw...this definately goes with the line, boys annoy girls when they like them. |
bekahlu chapter 10 . 9/8/2007 wow! I really really really really really like this story! I have stayed up until 11:37 to finish reading the last chapter so far, and I really like it! I love the personlaity in the characters, and the storyline! you have your origional spin on it which is good! please write and update very soon! I want to read about the date! |
Lady of Confusion chapter 10 . 9/8/2007 ITS GREAT! ILOVE IT! UPDATE SOON! |
Chelseamuffin chapter 10 . 9/8/2007 Haha, I'm AWESOME :) (I also happen to be wearing a shirt that says "I AM EFFIN AWESOME". Harr. Is mek laff.) ANYWAY. Sorry about late review D: This update came JUST after I got off the comp, too. I was seeing Hairspray for the third time and was all fangirling it with my best friend. It's what we DO. ANYWAY. ABOUT YOUR STORY. I liked the chapter- there were a few grammar mistakes, but... jah. And somewhere, you called Evan "Hunter", and I died a little bit inside. Cos Evan is better than Hunter, just because I said so. Need I go into further detail? AHEM. I liked this chapter, and can't wait to see the date :) Sorry that I've got to rush this- I'm having a very intense convo between seven other people. We're cool like that. |
Venus Smurf1 chapter 10 . 9/8/2007 Well, yes, I did enjoy having this chapter from Evan's point of view. It was very well done, and I enjoyed this! Can't wait for more! |
Fleeting Moment chapter 10 . 9/8/2007 E!1 UPDATE! |
horizons chapter 9 . 9/4/2007 oh i'm really excited for the next chapter now! it should be great. hopefully pretty funny! :) |
Sweetly Sarcastic chapter 9 . 9/4/2007 aly. geez. she can't even spell her name right. anyway, i have a feeling that everything that can go wrong will at the double date, and i can't wait to read about it! |