Reviews for Sweet Addiction: Just One Touch |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aly Lemming is SIMPLY annoying. Ouch. SO many likes! -shudder- But, she's moving the story along and that's very good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute! And so awesome - the suspense is building, and just awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaaha, so funny! :P Lovelovelove! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cheese, these cliffhangers are evil. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, awesome ending line, but it sucks about Hunter and that one... girl. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() M, triple fudge brownie. I need something sweet, since I'm eating something salty right now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm. Love triangle, almost. :P AWESOME. Strawberry xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. I can totally relate to her; even the simple word of 'chocolate' has me in the pantry. :P Oh, and the sitchamacation of Hunter and all. Except the guy I'm in... like/love with is one of my friends - not my best, but he is one of my friends. It sucks. Anyways, wow, evil cliffie. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() So awesome so far! :D Must. Catch. Up! :P Strawberry xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() the story needs to get ava and even closer. Maybe with a tragedy? Maybe hunter and aly die in a car crash and then evan is there to comfort her? Or aly and hunter run away. Or avas mom gets pregnant. Or something equally dramatic.. -Mariam |
![]() ![]() ![]() i almost forgot who hunter was... anyway, this was the best birthday gift you could have gotten me, even if you dont know me :) keep writing this story, because its really good. i cant wait for you to finish it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol. i'm constantly updating my chapters every four months or so. lol. i really liked this chapter though ] i think things are just getting good with evan and ava :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY! LOVING IT! Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww ever so cute and a great laugh hehe. im such a ditz i had to go back and re-read it all but i finished it and it made me smile. a smile i havnt all day. depressing few months hehe anywho i loved it and i know your having a hard time writing it up and all but i would love for you to write another chapter i want to know what's going to happen hehe i love it and i know others do as well so if you dont up date soon i will not be happy... oh and as i re-read it i got confused. when Evan first kissed Ava you put his middle name as Anthony but it changed when his mother had a go at him and then at the party when Hunter was kissing the girl you called her Gina not Aly. it just confused me and i know its back in the earlyish chapters but i thought i would let you know. it seems a pitty for new readers to get confused. keep going for us ok _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! that's so cute! luved the chapter! totally wicked awesome! i luv Evan! he is just so amazing! and shouldn't Ava be leaving the chase for Hunter now that he's going to be a dad? unless that Aly chick isn't really pregnent. in that case oh well. anywayz, update soon! ] |