hehe nice ending. I hope we'll find out in the next chapter how and when did he get in her bed. )

Good story, I like the idea. the chapters were funny and really good so far. Can't wait to read more and find out more about their pretended relationship )

great post! YAYAY post more soon.

AHH MY REAL LIFE HIGHSCHOOL IS RIDGE HIGHSCOOL!

NO FREAKING WAY! -Leela

ooh pink frosting yummy heehee sorry i know im reviewing the first chapter i really am not i just wanted to say im dieing here i love this its my fav out of my favs does that makes sense any way yeah so i was just wondering wehhn are you going to up date id love some more you know really i would i cant wait its so good really it is and i love the name hunter as well and even is so bad in a good way heehee cant wait for more keep going girl i cant wait

jez

I'm so glad I didn't give up on this story. I love Ava and Evan, how they interact with each other, and especially where all the tension between them is going. It seems to me that Evan is starting to like Ava more than either of them realize. I hope I'm right.

Can't wait for more!

oh wow.

i totally LOVED it!

i reealy hope that they would end up together soon...nvrmind. i take that back. its more fun and exciting to see the tension between them

awsome story!

x

This is soo cute!

that was great- i was the one who sent u the message telling u to reply to snowiangelz... but i wrote the wrong one its sleepieangelz

ur stories r great!

keep up the great work!

can't wait to read more... i wonder what will happen to Evan and Ava

UPDATE!

aw is so cute i like it

Hey！Great Plot so far! Keep up the good work C:

oh that's so cute at the end (:

but aly's an idiot, no offense. mainly because no one knows, signs of pregnancy don't come until about a week or two later .

oh well, hope you update soon!

dreamweaver138

i have to say, i love evan's character.

~k

omg! wow! absolutely wow! this is the best story i've read in a long time! it's just so cute! iit creates a fluttery feeling in my stomach too! Ava and Evan are just to cuute as well! i luv them to bits! PLZ UPDATE SOON!