ahem...lol, thats what I meant! monkeys, when I wrote the review I was having a brain cramp, looked up, saw Miguel, and was like, "Oh yeah, thats him!" Thanks for setting me straight.

That was awesome! i pretty much laughed throughout the whole thing. I cant wait until you update! :)

peace and love!

hehe i like the last bit. bout the one or two weeks to win her over. its obvious that she will fall for him fall probably hard too. this is awesome loving it all the way babe

he and uhh.. her and a.. wah? he just.. but she couldnt have liked it? but OMG. didnt expect that then and there. i tbought it would happen like later on but WAH?

so crazy. trying to keep up to date with your stories now lol. keep it up gurl

That was so great! *does a little dance and kisses chris on the cheek* i liked the ending a lot! Keep up the great work!

peace and love!

I like this story still...I love Amon! He amuses the hell out of me. He's so sarcastic, wish I had him around to hang out with all the time...*pouts* Can you make him out of clay and bring him to life? LOL

I love this story and I can't wait for you to update!

Damien is cool and all but I think he might be gay or something so I don't mind it if Sarah ends up with Miguel. He kind of grows on you after awhile. lol, she sure is a drama queen though, it provides Miguel with alot of ammo against her...actually it provides ammo for everybody against her. I enjoyed this chapter, thanks for the update! I personally think its going to take a week and a half.

I give it four days before Amon has Sarah won over...especially if he can manage to keep kissing her and avoid getting casterated.

Really good update! I'm kinda intrigued by Miguel. He sounds like an interesting character. Please update soon!

Ah I love it, Sarah rox!

so he's not an enemy...huh, this could be very interesting. lol, poor Sarah getting snogged by a vampire in front of her Shadow buddies...great update, keep it up!

Last chapter is great,

Keep Writing .

xoxo

Danielle

Sorry it took me so long to review. I did read this and I'm really liking the change in your vampire story. It sort of has a different voice then the other ones so far. When I was readinging it, it had a different feeling. I'm not that good at explaing/describing! I'm not fond of hunter stories but I like this one.

Totally ready for the next update! Great job on this one! Of course, you do a great job on everything!