Reviews for A poem about a lobster
Ronnie chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
Really good imagery, again. This reminds me of a daydream I would have.
JudgementMathew chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
I laughed.
eldrin chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
This is a surprising one...the title is immediately eye-catching, yet I wasn't really expecting the poem to be so delightful. There are some wonderful phrases - "That there is a shotgun/Between it’s legs" for example, and the poem comes together in a way that makes one laugh and think at the same time.

The only line that seems a bit off is the first. It juts out of the pacing of the rest of the piece too much.

Very nice work.
Exiled-Knight chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
So dream about that lobster often? Well that lobster was very deep. The poem was very serious and good and symbolic and then the lobster just pops up! :D