Reviews for Two Worlds Apart
hopelessromantic444 chapter 12 . 10/29/2007
aw poor tia (
SuperCUTEJensen chapter 12 . 10/29/2007
Poor Tia...I dont like that he's still with adokila (sp?) dump her and be with Tia...
emotionless-stares chapter 12 . 10/29/2007
ah! So sad. I almost cried. I really hope that they get together...
OoohLookACat chapter 12 . 10/29/2007
everytime i read a chapter

i feel like begging for more

but as an author

i know begging doesn't do much but push you

and therefore

you do a crappy job of a chapter because it's not up to your personal standards.


i loved teh chapter

poor tia

the world's on her shoulders and jaiden doesn't even realise.

will he try to get to know her?

hire a private investigator and find out everything about her?

something creepy and stalker-esque but insanely cute at the same time?

lol my imagination's run wild.

all you need to know is that i loved the chapter

and i'm craving more lol

good luck with your exams,

i just finished mine, thankgoshforthat!

hopelessromantic444 chapter 11 . 10/9/2007
great chapter!

tension! lol i like it!
emotionless-stares chapter 11 . 10/9/2007
AH! Jaiden! Why are you being such an ass? Don't you want to be with the one you love?
OoohLookACat chapter 11 . 10/9/2007
all i have to say is this:


lol can't wait for more

OoohLookACat chapter 10 . 9/30/2007

it's a good plot line

i do love it :)

so whether im wrong or right,

it doesn't matter

cause i'll read it,

cause i love it



awesome chapter

feelings in the air

all very confusing,

but way to interesting not to read

and the obliviousness of jaiden and tia

oh it's beautiful haha

i love the way jaiden is spelt

and how do you pronounce allodia?




or is it said some other way

that's been in my mind for a while

but yeah,

again i say i loved the chapter

and i can't wait for more

hopelessromantic444 chapter 10 . 9/30/2007
aw i'm glad they're both starting to realize how much they like eachother! it's cute. )
i like men with no men boobs chapter 10 . 9/30/2007
hey, i really love your story, i think it's so cute, update more when you can please.
DetachedAngel777 chapter 10 . 9/30/2007
Loved the update. So will Jaiden "figure" out his fellings for Tiana in the next chap.? Update soon
emotionless-stares chapter 10 . 9/30/2007
lol they're both so stubborn. They should just admit that they like each other already.
SuperCUTEJensen chapter 9 . 9/24/2007
Great chapter...I feel sorry for Tia and her mum...I cant wait to see what happens next with Tia and Jaiden...finally he dumped Allorida (sp?)
DetachedAngel777 chapter 9 . 9/22/2007
I found this story and started reading it. I like it. Update soon
hopelessromantic444 chapter 9 . 9/22/2007
aw cute story so far!

i love tia, she's such a sweetie!
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