Reviews for Judging the World
Around.about chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
I love it.

The message comes through loud and clear, and it's something that really no one can deny.

The formatting is easy to read,and your word choice flows nicely.

Simple and sweet.

Great Job

the satanic mime
KingdomRain chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
i like this and i really like the ending " you do nothing to help, so who are you to judge" i like it and i think many people can relate. all in all great poem
VanillaOreo chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
It's true, we shouldn't judge the world when we're not doing anything about it. I haven't thought about it until now, cuz I didn't know that I was judging the world until I read this. So yeah, thanks for writting it. It was short, yet affective.
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
My thoughts exactly. If you don't like the way something is, change it. Don't just pass it off to someone else because chances are they will do the same. Good message.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
I love this. Especially the last line. Your poems have so much truth in them. Great job. I need to stupid write or I'm gonna die. Stupid writers block.
shadowpreistess chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
I love this it's so true

Eva Tealkup chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
Very true. We should all do something to help, I think. Nice job.
Which Mistake am I chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
i like it i really do but then again i like everything that you write.