I enjoyed this; the imagery was excellent. I especially enjoyed the "blood" bits, and the overall message of the piece. Very good job. :)

Interesting work. I really liked the subject matter, I just wish you went more deeply into it. It's great short and sweet like this, but I think it would be amazing if you lengthened it. Other than that great job.

Great poem.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~

Wowee, why didn't I check this out sooner?

You are such a versatile writer. This is a great poem dear. It's epic, dramatic, metaphoric, rhythmic, compact, and all around awesome! Do you write poems often? Cause you totally should. I would like, read them. And love them. Alone...and in the dark.

Just kidding. I think...

Anyway, nice job! Yeah, that's what I was trying to say. :D

I love the "electric fingers" part of this. :D I was incredibly amused by your profile, and felt your poetry would be equally entertaining. I was right. :) Nice work. Keep writing! :)

Crazy goodness, yo! Whoo! (It's late and I'm a bit loopy.) :p

THIS IS AWESOME.

It could be, like.. the Deity Complex motto or sommat.

"We will have a revolution of our own."