Reviews for What We Didn't Know
Nessa2099 chapter 8 . 1/16/2013
Please please update soon I'm inlove with this story and it's characters! I can't wait to se what happens next!
kodkvnnrjgn chapter 4 . 6/16/2011
This is cool so far. I really like the character Amelia. I also like the dialogue between the guys. It sounds so real. haha
Eternal Essence chapter 5 . 8/9/2010
I can tell this is just getting started. Can't wait for your next update!
PoisonedRazorBlades chapter 3 . 5/28/2007
I like this story. Typos where "ed" should/shouldn't be on the end of a word, making the story worse. But I like it and if you take more care with you're typing it will be so much better.
three.word.lies chapter 2 . 5/27/2007
Well, i like it. I'm a fan of alternating point of views, but you have a few silly typos. But it's okay cos it makes me smile! :D
avoidingreality chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
good start, very interesting and mysterious
Brokenheartsaints chapter 2 . 2/21/2007
Pretty good, but it still needs tons of work. Clean up chapter two, it is still very sketchy, instead of making tons of edits, just take some more time with it. It doesn't explain anything I don't want to discourage you or anything! Keep writing and trying! I'll keep reading, its really good.