Reviews for strange worship
mello multicolored candlewax chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
hot damn. you should have called this 'plethora', both for the medical condition and the sheer excess of one note imagery. towards the end it gets a little incoherrant- which worked for this, it was like a slowdance spinning out of control- dizzying and beautiful.
eldrin chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
Incredibly vivid. Your classic imagery shows this interesting entwining of body and berry that is a bit chilling. The double alliteration of "kick is killing her thick tongue" is wonderful. Good poem.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
Truly vivid imagery. The reader gets thrust into the visuals so quickly and so completely. Very thought provoking. Good write. MD:77.
AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
Bizarre and tragically vivid. Christian communion? I thought pomegranate may have been more fitting myself, but I know little about cranberries.
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
The imagery from the first four lines is just gorgeous and the ending sends a thrill through me. It's a little spooky almost but amazing.