Reviews for The boy who lived down the lane
Wilkem21 chapter 2 . 3/21/2007
now here this. story is interesting, but the details suck. For example, what movie did they see? where did they shop and what for? Also, you may want to put "quotes" inside your story. It will make it a lot easier to understand. Otherwise, it was totally sweet.
Wilkem21 chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
went under bed to go to sleep? do you know how little sense that makes. Good otherwise.