Reviews for True Love is Never Easy |
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tornangelwings chapter 6 . 3/6/2007 HOLY HELL I LOVE THIS, THIS IS AMAZING KEEP IT UP. I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THE STORY LINE AND THE CHARACTERS, IRISH MEN ARE FUCKING HAWT. DOES BRENNAN HAVE AN ACCENT? |
Black and Bleeding Rose chapter 6 . 3/6/2007 I really like how this chapter played out. I loved how Brennan reacted at the end, and for me I kind of like seeing him lose control around her so it was also kind of funny. I like the story and I hope you keep it up. BTW, my story alerts are messed up too, so you're not the only one. |
pixiedust84 chapter 5 . 3/4/2007 I really like this story. It keeps me interested and it makes me laugh. Also, some of the things you are introducing (such as the list of things she can do) leave a great amount of opportunity for the plot to expand. Please keep writing this because I want to find out what happens next. |
Wishes Desires chapter 5 . 3/3/2007 Hey again, all the rest of my reviews have been complements but now i have questions such as: How did u come up with the idea? How long is it going to take Brenndan to do something good for once? And how many chapters are you gonna write? Thanxs, and ur right this chapter has moved forward alot. |
Wishes Desires chapter 4 . 3/1/2007 Oh my god it is really good and i think it is a good idea to switch back and forth in POV like u did with this chapter, cause u can see 2 POV at the same time. Keep them coming please, really enjoying it. |
Aznbeez chapter 4 . 2/28/2007 I think it's pretty good and i hope you keep writing. I think what should happen is that BRENDAN should be that one to confess that he loves her not Persy. I think he should do something else (like insult her) that is the worse ever and this time she actually ignores him for a long time and he can't stand it and does something drastic to get her back. OR she could be accepted into a special school only for music coz she's so good at it and she's leaving the next year or soemthing and he has to find a way to tell her before she leaves forever otherwise he'll never see her again. I hope you use one of these ideas (or both!) but if you don't like them i don't really mind. Anyway, keep writing and good luck! ~Belinda~ |
Nyleve Nalloc chapter 4 . 2/28/2007 I loved this chapter. Very nice. I love his name too. I think it was hysterical how you mention Paris Hilton to mock him. Omg, that had me giggling all day. Poor Paris. I like when the POV shifts. I'm writing a story from first person POV and I do the one chapter him, one chapter her and I'll admit sometimes it's hard because you want/need to show the other character's thoughts. For example, I recently had a "dinner with the in-laws" chapter from HIS POV and I would have liked to switch to hers, but I keep to my rule. So just think of how you're going to be working the plot and if you decide if you can pull off one POV for each chapter. You can always alternate lengths. I should have done that, but now I'm stuck at 40 words or more each chapter. LOL, which is okay. Anyhow. Can't wait for me. I'm really excited about this story! |
Nyleve Nalloc chapter 3 . 2/27/2007 Aw, I got a hug. Special mention- how cool. I liked this chapter. I can't wait to keep reading more. I love your story! And the name you chose for her, so cool. ) Update soon! -waits- |
Wishes Desires chapter 3 . 2/27/2007 It is really good so far can u hurry up and finish it cause i'm dying to know whether or not they actually stop being stupid and get to together? |
Nyleve Nalloc chapter 2 . 2/26/2007 Aw, the friends who love each other cliche! I love it. Your style of writing is more detailed than some others. Do continue! |