Reviews for Broken Promises
Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Excellent work.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
This is really sad but definitely really pretty. I like poem that speak of love, whether past or present love, I think those poems are beautiful. Yours is no exception! Keep up the great work! :]
Ironic Presence chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
That's so sad. I can relate, too, but from afar.

"Now I’m all alone

In this dark and empty hole"

:) Well, not the content, but it was a good two lines. Vivid images.

I don't know why, though, but the ending to it seemed abrupt. That's my only CC.

Otherwise, good images and good poem.

Presence.
Holdmyhandbabyy chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
I really like this poem, it's sad yet true.
we are miles apart chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
wow! i can feel the emotions around. :] can you check out my works too? thank you! bravo!