Reviews for Innocence
sissalovedme chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
i loved it baby it was awesome you are such a good writer
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
This is so sad. Nice work.

Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day.

Twilight Starr
DobbyLove chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
omg, that was simply amazingg. I loved it. So creepy and dark.
Xriny chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
:'(
GirlxAnachronism chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
Great imegery, and very thought provocing. There are alot of different ideas you could take from this poem
DEADLYpoisonous chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
i love this poem. i can feel its inner beat. beautifully written dear
Dragracingqueen chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
AW POOR BABY! T.T

I am gunna go read the rest of your poems...You do a marvoulus job dear!
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
At first i thought this was going to be a janies got a gun type song, but then he killed them! still, its sad..
the unreal chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
very good, very simple. the title is alright, but it could be better...i dont have any ideas.
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
good but creepy.
kathleen30263 chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Good!
Paige Angel Lenaigh chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
that was really good. it was simple and to the point but it kinda makes you wonder what the details of the situation was... hm... *ponders*
PocoSnow15 chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
I like your title, I thought it went really well with the entire poem and really enhanced it's flow. That was so sad! I can't believe their deaths at the end! Wow, great job!