Reviews for Pathetic
wishing.on.echoes chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
Very clever.

I like how you spelt it out with out really saying it.
Simfreak111 chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
another great work. sometimes i feel like a lost cause too.
DarkMoonRevenge chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Very nice poem. I love the hidden message, "I am a lost cause"
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
I love the style in which this was written. The emotions are clear and you worded this piece nicely. Great job and keep writing!
MarvellousMarvin chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
i love the i am a lsot cause. thats very clever. its a really good piece!