|Reviews for Depth|
| Heihana chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Every word caught my attention.
It was like watching a train wreck,
but this poem was nothing like a train wreck though.
What I mean is like when you see a crash
you keep looking and looking and you can't turn away
and your poem did the same, but with no crash?
Or you could say there was a crash because
Enki's all left to be forgotten and stuff...
YOUR POEM WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD AND DID
A REALLY GOOD JOB OR GRABBING THE READERS ATTENTION.
...Keep it up.
(sorry I spazzed out. I think way to much..)
| Herminia chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
This is a great poem. You've certainly had my attention since that very first line!