Reviews for Depth
Heihana chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Every word caught my attention.

It was like watching a train wreck,

but this poem was nothing like a train wreck though.

What I mean is like when you see a crash

you keep looking and looking and you can't turn away

and your poem did the same, but with no crash?

Or you could say there was a crash because

Enki's all left to be forgotten and stuff...

YOUR POEM WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD AND DID

A REALLY GOOD JOB OR GRABBING THE READERS ATTENTION.

...Keep it up.

(sorry I spazzed out. I think way to much..)
Herminia chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
This is a great poem. You've certainly had my attention since that very first line!