Reviews for Through Cold Hands
first-casualty-of-war chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Ooh I liked this. I don't know why, but I've always found this 3-lined stanza structure appealing. You've got some really nice lines in here, particurlarly the stanza about the dolls, but some of the lines don't seem to add up to that. For "In the middle of our tragic love." I'd suggest finding another word instead of 'tragic.' It seems like such a bland way to describe something that really moves you. Overall I thought this piece was very well done, great job )