Aw, I liked this. Something like this actually happened to me in the 6th grade ... but it didn't turn out well, lol.

Good job, a cute quick read.

-Andee

AW! that last part was so cute!

Aw, how sweet!

aww...that was truly cute and sweet. D

nice job.

Cute. (: Pretty snazzy writing, too. :D *adds to c2*

may i just say:

aw thats to cute i love it u should deffinately write more to this one ]

That's really good, sounds just like what would happen in real life. I thought it was great!

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~foreverswimming

aw! so cute and sweet! X)

Will you add a chapter? Can you, please? :) Heehee... got me all giggly.

That's really nice. )

Aww! So sweet! Its always nice when things work out like that.

that's cute! I was aw-ing by the end of it

cute ;)

Aww, this is sweet. I like it a lot.

One little thing - there's a phrase in the second sentence, "my mouth started to act like it was a fish", which might read better if it were reworded a bit. "My mouth started to act like it *belonged* to a fish", maybe? I got an image of a mouth sprouting fins and attempting to swim away, and although it made me giggle I don't quite think that was your point. :)

But overall, sweet and nicely-done. Good one.