Reviews for Just Something About Him
andee lee chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Aw, I liked this. Something like this actually happened to me in the 6th grade ... but it didn't turn out well, lol.

Good job, a cute quick read.

wordsRpwer chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
AW! that last part was so cute!
Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Aw, how sweet!
unknown chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
aww...that was truly cute and sweet. D

nice job.
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
Cute. (: Pretty snazzy writing, too. :D *adds to c2*
fancy feet chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
may i just say:

aw thats to cute i love it u should deffinately write more to this one ]
Foreverswimming chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
That's really good, sounds just like what would happen in real life. I thought it was great!

Ruler of the Freakin' World

graydrizzle chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
aw! so cute and sweet! X)
sweet vanilla mint chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Will you add a chapter? Can you, please? :) Heehee... got me all giggly.
abetterday chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
That's really nice. )
bad.karma44 chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Aww! So sweet! Its always nice when things work out like that.
dreamer chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
that's cute! I was aw-ing by the end of it
Love-Always-and-Forever chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
cute ;)
pennydeath chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Aww, this is sweet. I like it a lot.

One little thing - there's a phrase in the second sentence, "my mouth started to act like it was a fish", which might read better if it were reworded a bit. "My mouth started to act like it *belonged* to a fish", maybe? I got an image of a mouth sprouting fins and attempting to swim away, and although it made me giggle I don't quite think that was your point. :)

But overall, sweet and nicely-done. Good one.