|Reviews for Just Something About Him|
| andee lee chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Aw, I liked this. Something like this actually happened to me in the 6th grade ... but it didn't turn out well, lol.
Good job, a cute quick read.
| wordsRpwer chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
AW! that last part was so cute!
| Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Aw, how sweet!
| unknown chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
aww...that was truly cute and sweet. D
| Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 7/21/2007
Cute. (: Pretty snazzy writing, too. :D *adds to c2*
| fancy feet chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
may i just say:
aw thats to cute i love it u should deffinately write more to this one ]
| Foreverswimming chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
That's really good, sounds just like what would happen in real life. I thought it was great!
Ruler of the Freakin' World
| graydrizzle chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
aw! so cute and sweet! X)
| sweet vanilla mint chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Will you add a chapter? Can you, please? :) Heehee... got me all giggly.
| abetterday chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
That's really nice. )
| bad.karma44 chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Aww! So sweet! Its always nice when things work out like that.
| dreamer chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
that's cute! I was aw-ing by the end of it
| Love-Always-and-Forever chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
| pennydeath chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Aww, this is sweet. I like it a lot.
One little thing - there's a phrase in the second sentence, "my mouth started to act like it was a fish", which might read better if it were reworded a bit. "My mouth started to act like it *belonged* to a fish", maybe? I got an image of a mouth sprouting fins and attempting to swim away, and although it made me giggle I don't quite think that was your point. :)
But overall, sweet and nicely-done. Good one.