Reviews for Okay
Poinky chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
This kind of 'dialouge' poetry is new to me, but I think that this is quite an effective use of it. It reminds me of debating with yourself in side your head almost ... :\ It's hard to explain, but you've got me thinking up some new poems :D
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
With the words, and the rythm of the poem, you make it so clear what it was like. This poem was full of meaning, and I liked how you ended it with such a final word as simply "okay". You made it so clear the relationship is over. Great job with this poem! Keep it up and write more!

The Reverse Edge Blade