Reviews for one sad love song
Fading Memories chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
I liked that. I thought it was so simple, and yet so meaninful. And that feeling... not being able to forget, it just hurts way too much, doesn't it? And you expressed it really well.
CynChan chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
This should become a song. Or at least out there. because it's so true. I like your style; it's very interesting (the hyphens and italics).

I like the powerful verbs: sheltered, break, built, left, move on, ache, etc.

Great job again~~ :)
rikufanattic chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
I applaud you. One sad love song, I guess we've all felt like that once in our lives, or more. I know I have, so congrats on the poem, I love it.