Reviews for oceanside
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
powerful and beautiful... I like the whole water thing... awesome piece
kayla chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
i like the phrase salt- studded, and i like "your jaw line was a coastline"

if i keep listing things i liked this will be a veryy long review, so i'm stopping. i already told you in school today how much i liked this, but im telling you again.
sharks don't sleep chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
Oh, this is great! Very descriptive, indeed! I like the comparisons in here. Nice job.

Falcon