Reviews for Tattoos and Dolls |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. Sorry it took me awhile to get to it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Poor Lukas but go Brody! ~E.L. |
![]() ![]() loved it |
![]() ![]() ok love ur story, love the tattoos lol anyways cant wait for more chappies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like ur story so far, it's getting really good and i can't wait for the next part. Please hurry it up and make it good please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh he's hooked! yay! great job can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon. I can't wait to read more. I really like this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! I would say continue it, and I know that I will read it. -E.L. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It wasn't a bad story. But my suggestion? I'd refrain from using slang when writing. No 'u' in place of 'you', or 'kno' in place of 'know'. Slang is fine in a chatroom, but not in a story. Otherwise, you have a nice story on your hands. Maybe add more details, but that's only my suggestion. Good luck and I'll check back on this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm, it's interesting. LOL but i like it. Update soon, ciao. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh i'm liking this so far... good plot line! plus im sucker for the whole brother's best friend thing lol. great job can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i freaking love this so far,and i think you should try to make it less like she's desperate, and make him love her by just being her not pretending to be someone else. i really do love this beginning its amazing, he sounds freaking hott |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg i thought i did review! i totally love your idea and cant wait to see waht going to happen between brody and lucas! update soon as u can lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well i hope she get lucas! deff continue |