very interesting concept of story!

OOH and it's SUPSENSEFUL

lawlz

wow! that is just a brilliant story its a really good idea like 2 read more

Hm, there's not much I can say about this story at this early stage. It's a brave step, because I noticed so far its very different from all your other stories here, and it has some very interesting elements (I for one really want to know whether the "colour" being seen is a metaphorical colour (Something like, everyone has the ability, but loses it as they grow older) or a mysterious one (Something happened to her to make her able to see).

However, it is really too early for me to give any big positive, but on the plus side, I can pick on any major criticism either. But I'm definately looking forward to seeing where you're going with this.

Wow great story.

Rebellion Author.

AHHOMG

I love this story. You've managed to hold my attention through both chapters (something very rare, as I can be flaky when it comes to fictionpress stories). Your writing style flows, and I haven't seen any grammar or spelling errors yet. Keep going!

Wow, this was a very good start! It's intriguing and draws the reader in. I really like it; I want to see where this goes, so I'll put it on my Story Alert list. :)

I like how she has the mind of an artist (kind of like me) and she can tell when color people are on the inside. My friend can do that. She told all of us what our colors were supposed to be. I'm orange. Please continue this story. I would love to rea k, but I have to go get ready for school. (I woke up at 5.30 A.M. and couldn't fall back asleep)

aww

that sounds really rad so far

setting up for something good

do not throw this one away, i absolutly love it. seeing colors in people is amazing, the way you portrayed it is really good