Reviews for Smooth Move
Davina chapter 7 . 8/14
Stupid me *curse the auto correct * my gmail is
Davina chapter 7 . 8/14
I appreciate good sarcasm and dark humor. I like Rae's character so far, if you know about mbti (which probably you do) she sounds like an INFJ, all her quirks screams INFJ, from being psychology junkie, her anxiety yet independent self, the whole over thinking thing and how she's aware of others feeling to her observation skills and how she can read people. But i'd rather say she's an undeveloped INFJ. Although INFJs like to over think and predict other people actions, thinking, feelings but they're usually right and on the spot - meaning their prediction never miss - she didn't know how the other party would react in most situation and despite being sarcastic, she looks dump and oblivious in most fact - and I don't mean the awkward side of her - because usually INFJs tend to have high IQ score so it's kinda rare to see undeveloped one at her age . Overall I really enjoyed the story, I know it's too late to say this but I hope it will get better :)
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Plain jane chapter 23 . 7/5/2016
;)Hey rae nd wes lv the couple
Sweet somethimg chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
Great start :D lvn it
MileyRowling chapter 23 . 6/2/2016
Nice work!
somersaultkick chapter 23 . 11/5/2015
She still is infuriating as ever. Opening a door doesn't mean you are helpless.
I love the story, though I don't know why Wes loves her (sorry)... I'm just glad they are together. Yaay! No offence but I love your story about Thrasher way better since their stubborness did not irritate me (i just hate it when the main character's personality is irritating)
somersaultkick chapter 9 . 11/5/2015
In chapter 8, did she just say that she hates in when people have a point? Wtf is that? So she wants to be the one who has a brain oh now I definitely hate her.
somersaultkick chapter 8 . 11/5/2015
Ughh seriously, she is sooooooo ughhh I don't know what to say.
somersaultkick chapter 6 . 11/5/2015
To be honest, I don't like her attitude. It makes the whole I-read-books population sound mean. She doesn't have to be mean "all the time" and act like "the world revolves around my head not around the sun so you better please me".
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 23 . 7/12/2015
Wonderful story! This is probably my favourite of all of yours that I've read.
gyoung chapter 23 . 5/22/2015
I loved this story and recommended it to my cousin. I'm sure she'll like it was well.
Rae could be pretty annoying at times, but she is also a real character, the type of person that has no filter and actually voices real concerns us girls have at times (even though they are sometimes doubts born out of insecurity). My point is, I liked all characters, even Caleb!
My only concern is Wes' past...I wish it had been more elaborate.
Thanks for writing this amazing story!
gyoung chapter 7 . 5/20/2015
I know why I like Rachel, I can relate to her on several aspects: no partying, assuming stuff from other people, and even at times twisting words or implying stuff...Yeesh, it was like reading my thoughts on a computer screen. Great story, I really like it. Rachel's also very funny, even her sarcasm makes me laugh.
gyoung chapter 3 . 5/20/2015
I am truly enjoying reading your story. I like how it is written.
gyoung chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
You have made me laugh within the first chapter. Definitely going to be worth reading! I kinda like Wes already...which is also a good reason to continue reading.
Julietish chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, this review was written for it: Of course you know a story is going to be good if it is authored by the genius that is DancingChaChaFruit, and Smooth Move certainly lives up to these expectations.

Firstly, it’s laugh-out-loud hilarious, with lots of sarcasm, awkward moments and Rae’s endearing clumsiness. The story starts with Rae lying on the floor of a book store pretending to be dead so she does not have to admit that she fell over, wherein she meets Wes and the story progresses from there as Wes turns out to her blind date later that evening.

Rae makes for a strong, albeit a little irritating at times, protagonist who is convinced that the only males who like her are seriously flawed. She’s independent and always speaks without thinking. Her character progresses nicely over the story as she tries to be less abrasive and not retort sarcastically to everything.

Wes himself is charming yet shy, and he balances Rae well. He has a secret that Rae continually tries to discover that ChaCha keeps you in suspense of throughout that, if possible, only served to make me like him more.

ChaCha’s writing is brilliant with only a few grammatical errors and she fleshes out each character well. I particularly liked Rae’s best friend Izza, as she provides the voice of reason and though the two girls get along splendidly, she does occasionally get rather fed up with Rae.

Though the plot verges on the overdramatic at times, I feel it doesn’t detract from the whole as everything is largely driven by Rae and she reads far too many romance novels (even in my expert opinion).

All in all, this was a very enjoyable story – if you want a light read that is I’m-about-to-wee-myself funny then this is definitely for you.
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