Reviews for Smooth Move
toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
This. Is. Absolutely. Awesome. She's so like me! I sometimes mistake brother/sister for boyfriend/girlfriend. Haha! :P

Awesome beginning. :D
Paradigm08 chapter 23 . 8/25/2008
Awesome story! I loved it! Wesley happens to be one of my favorite names too hah. Well done!
Violet Thelaw chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
I'll try to read this when I get time. :D I think it's nice just from the summary

and it's good for you to be so humble as an author who receives so many reviews and awards! humble ones are quite rare XD

OK, off to read XD I'll try to review, too, even though it's completed already XD
Lovestruck23 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
Haha, This is an amusing chapter.

I like it.

P.S. Is Wuthering Heights really a good book?
Sel chapter 2 . 8/17/2008
I love that they were texting eachother!

I would do that too... :)
Sel chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
I love The Truth About Forever, and Pride and Prejudice!

Who doesn't?

And I was watched the Odessy in school and I've got to agree that the guy was sleeping with every female he came across...

Great Chapter :)
akaCHEEKS chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
haha, nice beginning to a chapter! i really liked it! its original man!
Bookworm28 chapter 23 . 8/13/2008
Aw, this story rocks!

I LOVED it :)

keep on writing - you got talent :D
Novella Vialli chapter 23 . 8/8/2008
asurana chapter 23 . 8/8/2008
Aw! That's so cute. XD I love Wes. He's amazing. And, I'm not going to lie: during the beginning of the story, Rae really got on my nerves. Like, I loved her in the first chapter.. but her temper and tactlessness really annoyed me. XD BUT LUCKILY, I love her now that she's actually matured. So good job. :D

Fantastic story, by the way. Did I mention that yet? Huh. I'm bad at writing reviews. In any case, I really love this. XD chapter 14 . 8/5/2008
I still love the story!

But I'm just wondering if this is correct, during the family dinner, Wes's mom and Wes calls Drea Lizzie? That's not right is it? chapter 8 . 8/4/2008
love the story!

but just to let you know, there are a couple 'taco bueno's around my area where i live.
subconscious-illusion chapter 20 . 8/1/2008
That whole Old Bay scene cracked me up. I'm from Maryland and my family does, in fact, put Old Bay on EVERYTHING. I love it.
AutumnColors chapter 22 . 7/27/2008
Hey! I know that this story is pretty old, and it's been finished for a while, but I really wanted to compliment you on your writing of Wes's letter. At first, I was a little apprehensive, because usually when guys write letters in fics like this one they turn out all sappy and completely out of character. However, this one pretty much ROCKED. It was completely in character for Wes-short, to the point, and not too frilly. It was also in character for your typical teenage guy (and by typical I mean relatively terse and not good at expressing emotion compared to girls). Also, I think that the grammar mistakes were a stroke of brilliance. At first, I thought that they were just mistakes that you'd made, but then I remembered that you've had pretty much impeccable grammar (and thank you for that; I am a grammar nazi myself so it truly warms my heart to see people using "whom,")throughout the entire story, and I realized that they were intentional, which just made it so much better. Anyway, I saw in your author's note that you'd agonized over Wes's letter, so I just wanted to tell you that I think it freakin' rocked. That's all!
Ngoc1231 chapter 23 . 7/9/2008
This was really cute! The only part that I didn't like was the beginning. Maybe it was cus it was like 11:00 PM when I started reading it and it seemed a lot haha P

I'll be checking out those other stories of yours that you mention in the AN.

Love the story! )

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