|Reviews for Smooth Move|
| i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 23 . 7/5/2011
"Did You Know? The average human eats eight spiders in their lifetime at night. GROSS, I know." i did SO not need to know that! *shudders*
anyway, i loved your story ) rae was just really endearing what with her clumsiness, had me laughing out loud a couple of times xD i once slipped right when i was entering mc donalds and landed flat on my nose, and it was really embarrassing, i just couldn't stop laughing and neither could the girl who recieved my order xD my friend was mortified though...
and i have to say i felt for wes, it's easier to lose friends than gain new ones. well, thank you very much for sharing, it definetly made my day to read this D
| LovenLife chapter 23 . 7/4/2011
hey...i recently finished reading your story, Smooth Move. i really liked it! loved the character portrayal and the plot...it was really hilarious in some parts..like those where Rae trips and does something stupid..:D
i don't know if you'll even read this. i read your homepage where you have posted that you might restart writing...i really hope you get your inspiration to write..!
| Chersparkle chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Hahahahha. The main character from The Truth About Forever was named Wes. Excited to read more :D
| popsicle-stick26 chapter 23 . 6/26/2011
Aww I loved this story! It was so cute and I looove Wes' character...you're such a good author! :)
| kaymuhray chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
"I could get lost between the pages of a book, losing myself in reality and immersing myself in the characters' perils. In a book, I could forget my problems."
I totally feel this way!
Good story by the way
| everyoneisMISunderstood chapter 20 . 4/25/2011
I was planning on only reviewing at the end of this chapter.
Then... you mentioned Old Bay.
Oh. My. Gosh. I LOVE OLD BAY! Power to the Maryland freaks! XD
This story is seriously awesome, by the way. Even more awesome because you mentioned the most badass seasoning in the world.
| Anne chapter 7 . 4/8/2011
Your story is really funny! ] I like your style of writing because I can always anticipate another scene that's going to make me laugh. That being said, Rachel kind of annoys me sometimes. The way she can be so insensitive about Wes' grandfather and all that. She was kind of like that a couple of times already. That, and how thick her sarcasm can be sometimes is really irritating. Why is she so mean to poor Wes D:
But other than that, nice work! Still wish Rachel would be nicer lol
| PorshaMoon chapter 4 . 4/5/2011
lol this story is so funny! :D I literally find myself laughing out loud at some parts. Rachel is awesome! Can't wait to continue reading
| artmagus chapter 23 . 2/27/2011
seriously it was hilarious. i couldn't control myself for lauphing out loud and everybody was sleeping :) i really liked Rae's remarks and Wes is so cute! I like the way you wrote ! you made me want to read more...
| cam3llia chapter 11 . 1/6/2011
One of the main reasons that I love this fic is because I love Rae's character so much. She resembles myself in a lot of ways. :3
Wes's character seems unerealistically tolerant thought.
| jorie chapter 23 . 1/6/2011
okay.. so, it started out great for me at first..
then it was just okay as i got along reading the rest...
there wasn't really anything exciting in this..
it was just okay.. pretty normal..
and i think was' excuse was not that heavy...
this was an okay read..
thanks for sharing..
thanks for those trivia too! )
| jorie chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
i usually give reviews after i read a completed fic but i cannot stop myself from leaving a comment after reading just the first chapter..
this is so funny!
i was holding back laughter coz im in a public place that tears started to well up in my eyes, i feel like im red as a tomato and that im about to burst...
gahd, i love this chapter XD
i like the girl here.. she's funny and clumsy but not in an annoying way like what i read in other stories..
she's totally lovable here...
| mi-to-chan chapter 23 . 1/3/2011
Finished the story for the sake of finishing. I like your writing style and all but you might want to work on characters and plot depth. It's nice that you decided to put more depth and explanation about Wes's past however the story (and Wes) got boring throughout the story when you didn't give away hints and bits of his secrets. I wasn't too impressed with the whole reasoning behind the way he changed either but practice should help. :) As well with Cole, I had no idea why on the earth he always acted so timid and.. blah. I was also anticipating when Wes would finally get to meet Rae's dad but it never happened. Best wishes to you and future writings!
| kpotts chapter 13 . 12/20/2010
I was just wondering how its possible that Rae's mom died 15 years ago and she Rae a younger sister that's 14. Was Emma adopted? Does she have a different mom?
| SeraLee chapter 15 . 12/6/2010
I love this story! :) You had me smiling the whole way through. Ha ha. Anyway, Caleb reminds me so much of Jacob, with his position in the whole love triangle and his sort-off play it cool attitude (Did you catch the rhyme?), you know, Jacob from the Twilight series? Sorry, I know a lot of people get annoyed when referenced with Twilight. :) Anyway, Loving the story and loving you. ha ha ha. Byee. :)