Reviews for Smooth Move
Antiquary chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
I like the chapter-it was a fun read. Out of curiosity (and not meaning to offend anyone) does escargot actually taste good?

And no salad is worth ten dollars. I mean, seriously. It's lettuce.
kelyn chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
gee i hate when the excellent exit strategy is a bust. i like rae's character because she's not the normal run of the mill high school girl. excellent couple of chapters, i can't wait to read more.

Semicharmed love chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
Lol. Well that's akward. Good chapter...very cute...and you find out a little more about Rae and what she's like.

Just out of curiosity, have you ever tried escargot? I haven't, but I was wondering if you had, and if so, if I was missing out on anything. :D

Can't wait for the next chapter.
xonea chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
i haven't tried the escargot before and i don't think i ever will.

My sister actually said it's nice but it's SNAILS.

they're so slimy know how snails are.

ANYWAY, i like your story and Rae is funny.

i like her personality. P
Essevera chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
haha i love the ending of the last chapter :)
yonderwindow chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
i like it; update soon!
xPink Blossomsx chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
This story really is funny. I loved that escargot part. Does it really taste good though? I mean, they are snails. But anyways, this chapter was a really cool one. ]
addicted2storiz chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
Loved the new chap, of course. I can't wait till the next one. I love Rae's bluntness and love of reading- that's totally me, including the whole saying stupid things. Yep, totally me... it's great that I can relate so well to her. My guess is that Wes is probably evaluating her and considering how "different/unique" she is... which makes me happy. As for you just taking the SAT for the first time, today, ... yeah ME TOO! I tried to be calm throughout the whole ordeal since I already taken my ACT, and way too many long courses/practice tests. But didn't you feel like stabbing it towards the end? How did it go for you? :) I realize I probably just talked more about the SAT than your story ... sorry... suffice to say that it's excellent so far to me. And hoodwinked is a good word... :)

slee5133 chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
lol shes such a weirdo. buts its not a bad thing. keep it up
Sally Can Wait chapter 3 . 3/10/2007

I don't really have much to say, other than that you rock.



Sorry. Really hyper.

Beautiful Destination chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
This story is wonderful so far! I love the main character :) Keep up the good work.

P.S. Congrats on the SATs! I took them in January for the first (and last) time. One step closer to college :D
hellolonely chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
Aww, this chapter made me all smiley and fuzzy inside. If that's even possible..I don't think I'd like fur to start growing inside of me...would you? I don't think so.

I think Rae's personality is really funny,as well as Izza's. Wes sounds cute and nice. And well, I can't really say much about Derrick :P Anywho, nice idea of having him own the restaurant and everything. Plus the money thing at the end was hilarious xD Come to think of's what my friends and i do all the time. x_x hah.

"My email address? My instant messenger screename? My freaking MySpace URL?" haha, hilarious highlight :)

O I wonder what's gonna happen now Rae's locked outside of Izza's house. Dun dun dun...I so can't wait for another week!
Miss-Scissorhands chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
Good chapter! It was funny. Update soon!
givelifeyurall chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
hahaha what a great ending. know a guy is rude when he doesn't ask for your myspace on a date :)
outsomniac chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
wow. snails. im not big on exotic makes me squeamish. like squid and frog legs and stuff. and dog. agh. wes is such a smexy name. hes a pretty smexy guy. hm. oh yeah. rae is amusing. very blunt and truthful. and always embarassing herself, something very familiar to me. shes an all around refreshing character. fab story
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