|Reviews for Smooth Move|
| Her Acoustic Heart chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
o0o, I just got an email about this one a few...weeks or so ago. I like it. Your writing style and all (insert smile here). One to chapter two!
| icedfaerie chapter 2 . 3/3/2007
Great story..really can't wait until the next chapter.
| Salt and Vinegar Pringles chapter 2 . 3/3/2007
This looks like fun! Good story, very unique.
| Antiquary chapter 2 . 3/3/2007
So I love this story. And when I read the first chapter and you mentioned Sarah Dessen, I basically squealed because I LOVE her writing. As for Rachel... she IS me. I actually do go into bookstores and look around the teen section and feel like a really big loser when the little twelve year old girl comes by and starts looking at the same books. And I love lived-in jeans (not like the fake ones you buy at Abercrombie but actually real lived-in jeans) and I'm super picky about guys and there was something else too, but I forgot what it was. Except Rachel's really tall, and I'm vertically challenged. :)
Anyway, I do really like this story; it had me cracking up. More importantly, Rachel seems like a real person, and the things that go through her mind-about how Izza is pretty but not gorgeous even though they're friend and all and how she says shes not trying to be mean, but it just facts-that's so realistic for me. I like it.
| Sally Can Wait chapter 2 . 3/3/2007
UGH OMG SO CUTE.
And Wes is so cute!
AND IZZY IS MY FAVORITE NAME! Even though you call her Izza. But whatever. Along with Marisol/gold. Ugh. You rock so much. I want more, like, now. Pretty please.
-Sally Can Wait
P.S. Dude. No wonder Wes noticed the texting. WHO TEXT MESSAGES WHEN THEY ARE ON A DATE? How rude. I'm probably just mad because it takes me roughly a minute to just punch in someone's number, though.
| Semicharmed love chapter 2 . 3/3/2007
Wow. Rae just really knows how to embarrass herself. She seems so cute, though. LOL. Wes seems to be popping up everywhere. ;) I'm very interested to see how the date goes. Can't wait until the next update!
| Luv-TU chapter 2 . 3/3/2007
I like it!
| bananasplit175 chapter 2 . 3/3/2007
Good chapter! : )
| bananasplit175 chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
Yay, new story. I love book stores, but I also love coffee shops. I'm not sure which I like more, but anyway good start! : )
| lalalala chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
wow, i have the book "the truth about forever" right in front of me D i just started the book so nothing too interseting is happened right now.
HAHA, i just realized that i mixed up the Wes in your story and the Wes in Sarah Dessen's book... oops. No wonder.. i was like, of course she should kno him! He catered at her house the other day and freaked her out!
heh, anyways, i'm looking forward to reading the rest of your story! )
| Lady Wrye chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Ahh, I love all the books you mentioned :)
What a wonderful story..I'm already in love with Wes..(It's probably just because of my bias with The Truth About Forever and the character Wes..)
Great job on the first chapter!
| xPink Blossomsx chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
Ooh I like it. ]. That chapter was funny. Please Update!
| iwishillwilluponyou chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
ah yay! finally a new story _
| Sally Can Wait chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
OHMY-FRICKING-GOSH IT'S ABOUT TIME.
I adored it.
Characterizationfewalkgj, as usual, totally one of your strong points. I love the protagonist. And Wes. And you, for finally posting this.
I can't wait to read more. So post it soon.
By the way, SARAH DESSEN RULES! So does Pride and Predjudice. And the movie had an AMAZ-ZA-ZING ending. And the Odyssey IS SO SEXIST. OMG. BUT LOL! From the story "The Day Some Squirrels Got High" on my favvy list, this girl wrote this poem about it.
"Odysseus slept with women
that weren't his wife
He was unfaithful
And therefore he was smite."
That still cracks me up. Anytehoodles, where on earth is the "reply" button? How do you get to it? :O
| jekodama chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
YAY! You're BACK! Yuppie! Yahoo! I liked this introduction, the girl reminds me of myself when I was 17, except I was a dwarf and EVERYBODY was taller than me, but her attitude made me remember myself as a teenager. Wes seems to be a smart hottie!
Until the next review!