|Reviews for The Melody of Love|
| taintedlove13 chapter 29 . 8/4/2009
Okay, I'd first like to say congratulations on writing such an awesome story. I absolutely loved it.
Next,I'd like to apologize for not reviewing each of the chapters. I was fortunate enough to find your story, and ever since then I've read it non-stop. So, instead of being a good reader and clicking that "Review this Story/Chapter" button, I chose to click next and zoom to the next installment. I'll try to make this review long to make up for all the ones that I didn't submit.
Once again, I'd like to state how much I liked this story. NO, not liked, loved. When I read the prologue, I wasn't sure. People expressing their feelings make me fidgety and uncomfortable, and Caden was laying his heart out. I decided to give the first chapter a try, though, and was surprised to find that I'd been so absorbed that I'd clicked the next button until I was on chapter three.
Ceri's and Caden's chemistry was fabulous. When they hurt for each other, I hurt for them. When Caden got distant, I wanted to yell at him. When Ceri tried to push Caden away, I wanted to beat her in the head until she grew some sense.
I knew Ceri was pregnant way before she knew it, but I think you intended for it to be that way. With all the sickness, exhaustion, and moodiness, who wouldn't have guessed it?
The only thing that I had a small issue (not a big one) with in the story was the repeated endearment "little one". For me it seems like something that people wouldn't really say that often, but these are your character's, and you're the one who created who they are.
Okay, this isn't nearly as long as I wanted it to be, but I can't think of anything else to say... except to reiterate that "The Melody of Love" is effin' fabulous. I definitely enjoyed it.
| nahbia chapter 18 . 8/1/2009
Hi! Love the plot so far, love Caden & Ceri... :)
However, I did notice that (in my opinion), some of your similes are a little too much- ie. "her eyes were like cold lightening"...
However, overall, I do love your writing style! Keep up the great work.
| AndItMovesUsAll chapter 29 . 7/30/2009
Wow, that was a rollercoaster to read, there was so much going on and so many different issues, i never knew what to expect! I really got into it, and i think Caden was such a great and complex character, so i fell head over heels for him. I loved the way you started with his description of Ceri as his love at the beggining, it was such a unique way to start a story and of course, on the last chapter, said 'so i told her..', it really helped to close the story properly, but im glad you had the epilogue years later, it reassures me it was a happy ending (minus the scariness of raising a child.) The main problem i had though, was that i didnt think Ceri acted as though she had ever been abused in any way, until it came out about travis there were no actions or even thoughts that suggested she had been repeatedly raped, because i would have thought that would really affect a person negatively eg. making them easily scared or jumpy, but she never seemed that bad. Although i thought you did good with Caden and his issues. And i know you said that their parents were bad but i thought that, especially Ceri's parents didnt seem to acknowledge what she'd been through or try to comfort them in any way at all, which seemed a little unrealistic.
| Amanda chapter 29 . 7/29/2009
I loved this story. It was so well written. :)
| silvershadow1379 chapter 29 . 7/26/2009
I just found this story and I loved reading it. I wish there was a bit more of Lio at the end as I loved him but it was still a great ending, I just wish I had more to read.
| pinkfluffyoranges chapter 29 . 7/22/2009
wow I absolutely loved this story! It didn't have all the stupid drama and angst you usually find in fictionpress. your characters were well rounded and had so much depth. It was a great story and I couldn't tear my eyes away from it.
| RayaSlayer chapter 29 . 7/19/2009
hehe...that was incredibly sweet!
Love the two of them together :)
| Faithfully Yours chapter 29 . 7/15/2009
OH MY GOSH. I loved it. ) Haha. I just had to share. This was a fantastic and well-written story. Great job. )
| fallingstar13 chapter 29 . 7/9/2009
I absolutely adore this story. I read it a really long time ago and had thought that I lost it. (I think I read it on AFF - did it have a different title over there?) Regardless, I really did a bit of a happy dance when I found this story again. So I would just like you to know that your story is so awesome that I remembered it for a long time and suddenly stopped and thought, "Whatever happened to that story?" So. Yes. You're awesome, as is this story. Just thought you should know! :)
| jaydee15 chapter 29 . 7/6/2009
wow hands down one of my all time favorite stories, i was on skow and i cant believe this hasnt gotten any awards or anything, so i had to nominatee you for this amazing storyy god luckD
| MarloCarlo10 chapter 22 . 7/5/2009
Ohh man I knew she was preggo!
I'm so glad Ra and Tony kissed! I just knew it was coming!
| MarloCarlo10 chapter 21 . 7/5/2009
Oh my, oh my...
Peeing alot, hungry at weird times...
| Ruby Sue chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
This was a wonderful story. I expected it to be cliche but it really wasn't. Your characters were complex and relatable, well somewhat (I'm no multi-millionaire), and I fell in love with each one (with the exception of Travis of course).
| MarloCarlo10 chapter 9 . 6/28/2009
Great chapter! Kind of a downer, but good.
| MarloCarlo10 chapter 4 . 6/28/2009
I love how the story is in Ceri's POV, but you add in the little parts of Caden's