Reviews for The Melody of Love
In.the.Wardrobe chapter 5 . 3/9/2007
another good chapter. i thought you'd done two, but there was just four chapter updates in my inbox. heh. three for a non-existent chapter 6 and one for chapter 5. dang. and i was hoping for a double :P heh. caden is so sweet, even if he was an ass in this one.
Singingperson chapter 5 . 3/9/2007
*sigh* poor Caden...and poor Ceri

Great chapter, it was really well-written. I really enjoyed reading it.

I really enjoy reading the parts where Ceri is trying to read Caden's actions and his eyes.
Ruh chapter 5 . 3/9/2007
i'd have to agree with you in saying that this is definitely my favorite chapter so far...i love the way cayden holds on to ceri for support, it really shows how much he really cares about her...can't wait for more.

p.s. this chapter was definitely worth the wait
anamika chapter 5 . 3/9/2007
and thanks for the full reply...

oh my dear sweet caden...what have you done to your self...*turns to ceri* take care of the boyo and yourself.

His anoimoisity with lex i understand perfectly...but sophie (if i go on ceri's impression) seems nice enough...

I find the young'uns adorable... ceri is certainly the mother to them. even more than Nanna...

question (yes again...) what does lex mean when he says "And Ceri is the way to Caden's heart. Or, at least, one of them." one of them? one of his hearts? don't make sense to me...

the end part with caden and ceri was perfect. *turns to caden* she (ceri) has all rights to ask if you continue to give out such weird signals!

tnt ciao
anamika chapter 4 . 3/8/2007
argh I hate ficpress! it ate up my alerts for your story...

Anyways

Damn I like Caden he seems to be one of those utterly annoyingly beautiful people. silent brooding etc...

I'm interested how you found the name Pia...

2nd chapter was interesting... surely dave isn't tht money minded? Caden seems to have a grudge with both the elders it seems. Ceri the eternal peace-maker...she's sweet I like her.

3rd chappy... hmm their school seems nice...melanie nd pia are fun...trust cade to be hanging out with baboons...

good chapters, look forward to the rest.

tnt ciao
In.the.Wardrobe chapter 4 . 3/6/2007
hey. good work so far. very interesting and you've fleshed out the characters quite well. i cant wait for more.
Most.Beautiful.Whiskers chapter 4 . 3/6/2007
AH! that was great. totally great. COMPLETELY great. GREAT! i loved it! i hope you post more soon! It's all gonna "start" in the next chapter? you mean, it gets BETTER? impossible! Oh, that's how you pronounce it? i was all, "Seeree...Sharee...Sheeree..." yah, didn't even get close to what it actually was, lol. Umm, when Caden was all, ,"This don't have to do with what happened last year." was that something that we are supposed to know, and i just missed it and/or forgot (very likely)? or is it some secret thing that is to come in other chapters? Cuz i sure as heck don't know what he meant. PPMSTASAP! (Please Post More Sooner Than As Soon As Possible)
Singingperson chapter 4 . 3/5/2007
YAY, Ceri and Caden may have a chance! :)

This chapter ended so nicely.

I LOVE this eyes thing, her trying to read him and all. It's really neat.

I'm impatiently waiting for the nxt chapter.

-Singingperson
Ruh chapter 4 . 3/5/2007
your update was like express service...it was great...and i loved this chapter it was great to learn more about both characters...can't wait for the next chapter...as always update soon
Ruh chapter 3 . 3/4/2007
omg...i love your storya nd this chapter was amazing...please please please update ASAP
Most.Beautiful.Whiskers chapter 3 . 3/4/2007
ah! that was totally awesome. i loved the last part. YES! Oh, how do you pronouce, "Ceri"? I can't figure it out, lol. PPMSTASAP! (Please Post More Sooner Than As Soon As Possible)
skydancersrule chapter 3 . 3/3/2007
i like this story. i had been looking in the homepage thing and your title caught my eye. i know its kinda bad seeing as it could be interpreted as judging it by the cover or something but eh. well anyways. i hope this becomes big. or if it doesnt that you are happy with it and kept updating. that would be best instead it becoming big and you just updating because of some twisted reason that you write for your fans and not for the lvoe of it. okay sorry rambling here. basically, i like your story and i hope you update soon.
LovelyDreamer chapter 2 . 3/2/2007
I adore this story, i love how complex the characters are, well Ceri and Caden, they in themselves are not cliche really and i really do hope you will continue...
Most.Beautiful.Whiskers chapter 2 . 2/28/2007
omg, i loved it even more. it's so sad that he loves her so much, and for so long, and she doesn't even feel the slightest bit of that for him! she better, soon, or i'm gonna have a heart-attack! i'm dead serious. this is a happy-ending, right? And yes, that was TOTALLY fast! I couldn't believe it! I thought you were gonna take a long time, but...it wasn't even 24 hours, i don't think! that's freaking amazing, right there! do you have it pre-written, or something? omg, i was so close to tears when i read the last line, it was so sweet. perfect ending for the chapter!

"However his eyes softened each time Ceri came into the room."

it was...just...UGH! so dang awesome! i can't even express my delight in words. Think you can post even SOONER this time? (not that you need to, since you posted so quickly already, but i'm just seeing if you could actually do it) PPMSTASAP! (Please Post More Sooner Than As Soon As Possible!)
Preethy chapter 2 . 2/28/2007
I love it!

Update soon.

Bye
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