|Reviews for sad days|
| ebony-ink chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
For want of a better word (honestly this was the best I could come up with) this is kinda cute
I like the message and it flows really nicely.
My favourite bit was...
there wasn't a safe to lock our hearts in
and sometimes they were liars.
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Aww another great piece ofwork!
| sleeplessblue chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
that was very nice! so melancholy and... -searches for word- insightful, maybe? I like these lines:
"when I knew I wouldn't see you again I was sad, but the sun sparked so I thought it wasn't THE END completely" I like that image-the sun "sparking." Cool.
:D Keep writing!
| Teao Girl chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
That's so true. No matter how sad we are, the entire day never is- someone is always happy!