Reviews for sad days
ebony-ink chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Hi

For want of a better word (honestly this was the best I could come up with) this is kinda cute

I like the message and it flows really nicely.

My favourite bit was...

there wasn't a safe to lock our hearts in

and sometimes they were liars.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Aww another great piece ofwork!

Kristie Marie
sleeplessblue chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
that was very nice! so melancholy and... -searches for word- insightful, maybe? I like these lines:

"when I knew I wouldn't see you again I was sad, but the sun sparked so I thought it wasn't THE END completely" I like that image-the sun "sparking." Cool.

:D Keep writing!
Teao Girl chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
That's so true. No matter how sad we are, the entire day never is- someone is always happy!