Ach, AmaZING!

This story was pretty darn great(:

Amazing.

I think its awefully cute!

and poor Andy, being tourtured like that by his love... what they do to us... love drives us all insane.

Lovely story.

XOXO

aw

very nice and well written,,keep up the good work...

aww.. cute.:D love it.:D

Heck yeah! that was awesome.

Chapter 2, paragraph 7. 'He resolutely broke away from a sudden forbidden vision about Emma's full, smirking lips at her enquiring nudge.' Inquiring is misspelled. Same paragraph, 3rd sentence, you phrase the sentence awkwardly. 'She was driving him barking mad anyway, and better be it about things he could somewhat handle.' You probably meant, 'She was driving him barking mad anyway, and it better be about things he could somewhat handle.'

I'm so glad to have read this, however. That's just what I picked up after I saw the author's note. It didn't affect the overall story to the point where the reader has to stop every few seconds because of a misspelling. Thanks so much for bringing it to fictionpress.:)

this is really sweet! i loved it :D

wow cute story :)

tis is funny but nice. emma and andrew being best friends:-)

That was absolutely adorable! I loved the ending. Great job! :P

aw that was cute i love stories were best friends realize they loved each other all along!

That was just amazing. Now I have this grin plastered on my face, which I don't think will go away soon. What? A girl has to have romance in her life, even if it is fictional.

i absolutely loved it. it's everything a short story should be. plus, it's just plain sweet.:D