|Reviews for Eyehole|
| mobman chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
Do I laugh... or simply smile?
| Angelic Hellraiser chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Oh... my... God! I love it! This was sadistically hilarious!
| luv me like no other chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
just a little disturbing, eh?
haha, i liked it anyway, especially the last line, it was kinda unexpected. thought that main body was more like S&M stuff, rather than killing someone.
| R. Louise chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
Is it wrong to say that this made me laugh?
The last line just took me by surprise. (You'd think the title would be sufficient warning.)
Still loving it,
| Bananas in a Blender chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Ew. Nice imagery, but... ew. For some reason, I think of Phantom of the Opera.
Great job, though. I liked the title and idea for this poem.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
nice tone with the sharp imagery and wording, especially the beginning(it really sets the mood for the rest of the poem). it's vague and strange and yet i love it.