Reviews for Eyehole
mobman chapter 1 . 4/29/2009

im confused.

Do I laugh... or simply smile?

Angelic Hellraiser chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Oh... my... God! I love it! This was sadistically hilarious!
luv me like no other chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
just a little disturbing, eh?

haha, i liked it anyway, especially the last line, it was kinda unexpected. thought that main body was more like S&M stuff, rather than killing someone.
R. Louise chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
Is it wrong to say that this made me laugh?


The last line just took me by surprise. (You'd think the title would be sufficient warning.)


Still loving it,


R. Louise
Bananas in a Blender chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Ew. Nice imagery, but... ew. For some reason, I think of Phantom of the Opera.

Great job, though. I liked the title and idea for this poem.
lackluster chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
nice tone with the sharp imagery and wording, especially the beginning(it really sets the mood for the rest of the poem). it's vague and strange and yet i love it.