Reviews for The Deadly Flower
HighOnAirGurl chapter 30 . 1/22/2013
"Weird shit, right?" he commented.

"Yeah," I agreed vehemently. "Weird shit." - loved that line ha!

So, I am really really really sad that this is over, but it's been such a great journey. i think I've been following this story for 5 years now...and I just love it. It's the only story I've kept track of on this site. Thank you for sharing and never stop writing! I am excited for Vertigo for sure.
KrazyFrog100 chapter 30 . 1/22/2013
Wow. Wow wow wow. I loved the ending. I loved that you had moments with Dahlia by herself, moments with Liam, and of course, moments with Callum. I can't believe this is finished but I LOVED it. I look forward to all of your future work because you are honestly one of the best - if not the best - writer on FP.
Anon chapter 30 . 1/22/2013
I have been lurking for years. BUT I think I might be your biggest fan. Sorry for never reviewing (lazy) but I just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed reading the Deadly Flower and how much I love your writing. Keep up the great work...I'll be lurking around Vertigo too :-D
shakespeare chapter 30 . 1/22/2013
epic. thank YOU for sharing this masterpiece with us! you ended it perfectly. loved the earl grey tea reference. i love dahlia and this story!
Guest chapter 30 . 1/22/2013
wow, i cant believe it's over :( it's actually fun because i've been reading and waiting for this story for almost 2 years already. it was truly satisfying, and i hope that i will get to read more in the sequel. thank you for not leaving your readers hanging :D i hope vertigo will be as awesome as the deadly flower :) (lol, but i'm sure it will)
bowl of strawberries chapter 30 . 1/22/2013
you astound me. the scene between liam and dahlia was great and the scene between dahlia and callum melted my heart. but my most absolute fave part was the last "summary" type section. beautifully written. i like that you wrapped so many different things up (like will and her job). the cliffhanger was well-done too because it's not really a cliffhanger, but something to get us excited about the sequel. congrats on finishing your first story. thank YOU for writing it.
Aeris.Lockheart507 chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
I love this story! I read tons of books and out of all those many books your story is one of the few that I remember. Your characters are unique and beguiling and the plot is captivating. Keep up the excellent writing and I'm looking forward to reading Vertigo and the sequel to The Deadly Flower even though I know the latter is a long time coming. Lots of hugs! Take care
charmedblush chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
Well that's the end then!

It has been a long while hasn't it. I started this a few years ago too, and I have lurked quite a bit. I have recently come back to read it all again in one go (I hate waiting for new chapters, but I completely understand), and I find that I have completely changed from my previous perspective on romance. I now find that I really like Liam a lot more than Callum. I'm so glad there's going to be a sequel, because I really think that I'd like that to be an angle that is explored. I love that she's a strong female protagonist - I really do - it is one of my favourite things about your story. Go you.

I find though that such strength conflicts a bit with how totally in love she fell with Callum when she really knew nothing about him, just that he saved her and is very protective. I think Liam has a greater rapport with her from the beginning, and that a relationship between the two of them would be grounded on something much more solid than a gorgeous stranger who saves her all the time.

Great story though. Wow, 6 years!
soo-hwa chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
Oh!

I felt that moment when Dahlia and Callum first began talking to each other, crazy (and I think I was making faces as I was reading... uh, you know...). I thoroughly enjoyed how you decided to end this! It's been a few years, but well-worth the wait. Thank you so much for posting and giving me the pleasure of a wonderful read.

Good luck with Vertigo!

VD (previously ixoclock/aznighast)

ps: omgsequel/sqee

Please take care! :3
Long live the magic chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
This story took 6 years? Wow I never even noticed. Your writing didnt show much of a change, but your such an amazing writer that I don't think getting better is possible. I mean you are seriously an amazing writer. To think you were this good at 15 too. You better have plans to be a real writer in he future.

Enough of me fangirling though and onto... More fangirling? I'm so sad the story's ended. this story was my favorite, I think I picked it up somewhere between chapter 15 and 20? and ever since I started I was always checking to see if you'd posted another chapter. (Creeper much? Heck yes.). I love your story other vertigo too, I started that one a few chapters ago and it's my first (and only) non-supernatural story I've read on this site (I'm into supernatural fantasy crap, vertigo is an exception), but I hope you finish it soon so you can write the second book for this one. I don't wanna wait! But I guess I have to. Ugh cliff hangers and seriously amazing writers!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
Amazing amazing chapter! I love the way you ended it! It's like a cliffie, but at the same time it isn't. I can't wait for the sequel! I love how everything (almost...) sort of came to an agreement... all the situations, I mean. I'm not so sad that this is over though, because I know some things:
1. you'll be working on my favorite story (not that I don't love this one... I just got a bit out of touch with it).
2. There's a nice long sequel waiting for me! :)
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
WindyStars chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
First off, this is not original work. Twilight made vampires popular, and so many other people branched off of it. You're one of those people. You even made the guy have bright green eyes. Edward from Twilight had gold eyes. See?
Writing In Ink Forever chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
I was so sad to see this story end.

This Chapter closed the story nicely, and that cliffhanger was mean of you. . I wanna know what happens.

Liam lmao. It shows that he cares for Dahlia.

Omg I thought Callum was going to propose to Dahlia! You got my hopes up! Lol. The ending of the next book or beginning should totally have him proposing to Dahlia. :o Just a suggestion.

Great book! Is this going to be published?
selenafan621 chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
So far, this story is pretty good, but I think it can get better. By the end of this story, I might do my signature "I love this story" happy dance! ;D
Lauren Stargazer chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
As soon as I got the email telling me this story was updated, I immediately stopped everything else I was doing (which happened to be a report on a physics lab that I was just finishing up) to read this. Gosh, I was so excited and slightly nervous about how you'd choose to end it, but I see now that I could not have asked for anything better. I loved it. As always, Liam made me laugh out loud and Callum always makes me want to strangle him with hugs.
I'm really glad to hear that there will be a sequel. I'll definitely be reading that one too. So congrats on finishing this lovely story and good luck on all your future projects. Thanks for sharing and keep up the excellent work. :)
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