that was SO good. i absolutely love the fact that you let dahlia take down lilynn all by herself, no help from the men. i feel like that is a perfect way to end it, dahlia stayed true to who she was. the feminist in me is rejoicing! the action was incredible and i was riveted the whole way through. excited for liam and callum though! i don't want this to be the end, though.

Awesome chapter! Love it! finally got the bitch . Update soon.

I can't believe there's only one more chapter left!

I loved this chapter. It was just very well written. You're one of the few authors that can make action scenes interesting to read. lillyn got what was coming to her, which is good. I'm just curious now if you're planning on making a sequel now because of the Randall character.

I'm excited to read callum's reaction to her recklessness and curious as to what it'll be.

anyways, update soon!

Well this chapter certainly was exciting! Absolutely brilliant. It makes me really look forward to the next chapter (can't wait to see Callum and Liam's reactions). Only one left, eh? Oh, the bittersweet feeling of finally reaching the end. Well, I'm sure the next chapter will be wonderful. Thanks for sharing.

Honestly, she's awesome. Really. It's been a while since I read a full chapter so far in a story that was only focused on the female character and where the male character made no actual appearance. It was brilliant! Though, now I can't help but think of Callum's reaction at what Dahlia just pulled. Oh, by the way, please tell me that that piece of foreshadowing with Liam and the reason he calls her sunshine is not really foreshadowing and it was just for the sake of conversation. I like Liam's character too much for anything to happen to him :)

Amazing chapter! I love all the action! Sometimes when people write action scenes they completely forget to show the emotion of the characters. I think you did an amazing job at that - not too much emotion and not too little.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

This was a GREAT chapter!

Dahlia is an amazing character. I love how she just takes matters into her own hands without asking permission. Priceless.

I missed Callum and Liam, but Dahlia made up for that. And that scene with her and Lilynn. That reminded me of something off of Criminal Minds. It was really good and realistic.

I'm awaiting the next chapter!

long chapter please

I absolutely adore this story. I'm eagerly waiting for your next update. Keep up the great work!

I'm going to rush this review before I jump into bed. Sorry. But I love the whole action in this chapter. Although it was fun to see Callum & Dahlia's relationship develop, I really want to get to the nitty-gritty part of the story. I'm wondering whether Dahlia will learn something new about her powers? & angry Dahlia is pretty awesome.

Only thing: [Oh, yes, I was going to do this.] - shouldn't it be "Oh yes, I was going to do this?" Although I suppose it depends on how you say it.

Can't wait till the next chapter. Oh. & to answer your question. hm. I'm not sure. How long would longer be exactly? And how short would shorter be? I like longer chapters because I always feel that not much happens in shorter ones - though that's unlikely in your case.

BUT ONLY ABOUT THREE CHAPTERS? :OOO On the bright side, you'll soon be able to list this story as complete & I'm sure that'll feel satisfying :)

Wow, I just finished reading this chapter! I couldn't get the time to read anything for the last couple of days! Sorry for this looooooooonnnnng overdue review!
I loved the Dahlia and Liam conversation at the end the best! Liam has it baaadd!
I'll get to your next chapter asap!
Cheers!

Wow, that's really reckless! I'm sure the boys will rip her apart for that stunt. :D
Can't wait to read the next chapter!

I've one big request though:

Don't. Kill. Liam. ;)

Lian is cool. And I think he already got a mayor role in the story, so I'm happy as it is. Although it might be nice, once Callum's story is told, to tell an own story about Liam... ;)

Love this chapter! Looking forward to the next!

if you are going to keep taking forever to upload, i'd suggest long chapters. No pressure though