Awesome story!

sorry for reviewing so late! been busy! great chapter as usual! :)
and to answer your question...i'd rather u write short chapters or slightly long ones. just saying what's convenient for me! others might not agree with me since u write so brilliantly! ;)

Ahh! Loved it! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story and I'm kinda sad to see that it's over, but the promise of a sequel is reassuring. Regardless, it's at a point where the story itself was sealed with a pretty little bow and a sequel is just an added bonus. Very well done! :D

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
CAN I TELL YOU HOW ABSOLUTELY SAD I AM THAT THIS STORY ENDED? IT WAS ONE OF MY FAVOURITES EVER ON FICTIONPRESS.
I USUALLY DON'T READ VAMPIRE STORIES, BUT FOR YOOU. ERMAHGOD, I JUST HAD TO! IT WAS AMAZING. XO
CAN I TELL YOU HOW ABSOLUTELY EXCITED I AM FOR THE SEQUEL?
LIAM AND CALLUM ARE AMAZING! XOX
AND DAHLIA IS THE BEST PROTAGONIST EVER! SHE IS MY FAVOURTIE EVER. XOXO
SUCH AN AMAZING STORY THIS IS. IT IS REALLY GREAAT!
YOU ARE A TALENTED WRITER! PLEASE GET PUBLISHED SOON XO
I SERIOUSLY LOVE YOU XO

Is it odd that Liam reminds me of Spike from Buffy? lol

HHOOOOORRRRAAAAYYYYYYY FOR ANOTHER SEQUEL OH MY LANTA YES.
This story is actually so exciting, I look forward to it every day. And now there is a sequel makes it that much better.
I'm okay with reading Vertigo in the mean time, because it is amazing. Wooooo happy camper alert.

AHHHHH! A cliffhanger!? Seriously! I LOVED this book sooo freaking much and I love the way you write. You have an amazing ability to capture absolutely everything into a story! I love it so much and I can't wait for the sequel! I will be reading it!

i loved the ending! you wrapped things up but left some mystery for the sequel. and there were funny moments (liam) and sweet moments (callum) and really well written moments (i liked the beginning scenes at the police dept). i loved the summary at the end. it flowed so well.

i am going to miss this story and the characters so much. but wow, congrats on finishing!

You are so completely deserving of all the reviews/faves. I'm always skeptical when reading super popular stories, but this one really knocked my socks off! You are such a skilled writer. Thank you for giving us all such an amazing story and never stop writing!

I am so glad you finished this story. At first though I didn't believe it but now it makes sense since their is a sequel. Can't wait for the sequel. Great story. :)

I can't believe its over. Though putting that "complete" sign next to your summary must feel pretty pleasing. :)

I loved every single bit of this chapter. And hearing Liam again - felt like it had been eons since they'd last been in a chapter. You haven't lost his voice though. He feels so real, just like Dahlia and Callum do. And I love how you brought up Liam's worry about his car. It reminded me of the time where he talked about his collection of cars. I love that continuity.

I also found the part where you described Dahlia getting ready for the party really...interesting. Haha, I can't find a word for it. But I loved knowing how she was physically - and how she was preparing for a party with all her scars. And then how she was so...uncaring about her cuts. She described them in a matter-of-fact way and that really shows her character. And I never really realized fully how much she had gone through until she described her appearance. So, yeah.

Then, of course, the scene with Callum. I love how he got the conclusion that he'd just have to bear with it, because her courage & independence were the things about her that he liked. You didn't make him say "Make sure you won't do it next time" or whatever; you made him accept her as she is because, even though it scares him, it's who she is. And he wouldn't change that just so that he can relax.

"No one noticed when we slipped away to make out in the pantry, either. Well, no one except for Liam, Lester, Ophelia, Raven, and the rest of the security personnel, but I was okay with that." - hahaha, I loved these two sentences.

The last part felt like a sort of summary, but that felt right. Time passes and things change and it was just tying off the small things. The last part was great. I can't help but overanalyze and feel as though when Dahlia opened the new page to her book, she was opening the new page to her life as well? A new page of the series? Nevertheless, I liked it.

Aaaand it's done for now. Woah. Woah. (Seriously jealous - years of writing and I've never managed to finish anything...yet.) I am glad your writing a sequel though. I'd like to know more about Dahlia's powers & how she got them.

Off to reviewing Vertigo now...

Oh, that was beautiful! I could probably babble on about how amazing the entire story was, and how perfect the last chapter brought everything together, but I'm still too wrapped up in your story to be able to say that much. One thing that I absolutely adore is how Liam and Dahlia's friendship is so well-defined. Also, her relationship with Callum. That's just lovely :) And the fact that he accepted her stubbornness and independence just made this one of my favourite stories ever! Neither of them asks the other to change, but rather they both accept their good and bad points. That's a very very good portrayal of a relationship.

I did end up writing too much. Ah well, that was a wonderful story! Congratulations on reaching the end and thank you for letting me, and all your other readers, enjoy it.

I cant wait for the sequel!

"Weird shit, right?" he commented.

"Yeah," I agreed vehemently. "Weird shit." - loved that line ha!

So, I am really really really sad that this is over, but it's been such a great journey. i think I've been following this story for 5 years now...and I just love it. It's the only story I've kept track of on this site. Thank you for sharing and never stop writing! I am excited for Vertigo for sure.

Wow. Wow wow wow. I loved the ending. I loved that you had moments with Dahlia by herself, moments with Liam, and of course, moments with Callum. I can't believe this is finished but I LOVED it. I look forward to all of your future work because you are honestly one of the best - if not the best - writer on FP.