|Reviews for The Deadly Flower|
| bowl of strawberries chapter 30 . 1/22/2013
you astound me. the scene between liam and dahlia was great and the scene between dahlia and callum melted my heart. but my most absolute fave part was the last "summary" type section. beautifully written. i like that you wrapped so many different things up (like will and her job). the cliffhanger was well-done too because it's not really a cliffhanger, but something to get us excited about the sequel. congrats on finishing your first story. thank YOU for writing it.
| Aeris.Lockheart507 chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
I love this story! I read tons of books and out of all those many books your story is one of the few that I remember. Your characters are unique and beguiling and the plot is captivating. Keep up the excellent writing and I'm looking forward to reading Vertigo and the sequel to The Deadly Flower even though I know the latter is a long time coming. Lots of hugs! Take care
| charmedblush chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
Well that's the end then!
It has been a long while hasn't it. I started this a few years ago too, and I have lurked quite a bit. I have recently come back to read it all again in one go (I hate waiting for new chapters, but I completely understand), and I find that I have completely changed from my previous perspective on romance. I now find that I really like Liam a lot more than Callum. I'm so glad there's going to be a sequel, because I really think that I'd like that to be an angle that is explored. I love that she's a strong female protagonist - I really do - it is one of my favourite things about your story. Go you.
I find though that such strength conflicts a bit with how totally in love she fell with Callum when she really knew nothing about him, just that he saved her and is very protective. I think Liam has a greater rapport with her from the beginning, and that a relationship between the two of them would be grounded on something much more solid than a gorgeous stranger who saves her all the time.
Great story though. Wow, 6 years!
| soo-hwa chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
I felt that moment when Dahlia and Callum first began talking to each other, crazy (and I think I was making faces as I was reading... uh, you know...). I thoroughly enjoyed how you decided to end this! It's been a few years, but well-worth the wait. Thank you so much for posting and giving me the pleasure of a wonderful read.
Good luck with Vertigo!
VD (previously ixoclock/aznighast)
Please take care! :3
| Long live the magic chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
This story took 6 years? Wow I never even noticed. Your writing didnt show much of a change, but your such an amazing writer that I don't think getting better is possible. I mean you are seriously an amazing writer. To think you were this good at 15 too. You better have plans to be a real writer in he future.
Enough of me fangirling though and onto... More fangirling? I'm so sad the story's ended. this story was my favorite, I think I picked it up somewhere between chapter 15 and 20? and ever since I started I was always checking to see if you'd posted another chapter. (Creeper much? Heck yes.). I love your story other vertigo too, I started that one a few chapters ago and it's my first (and only) non-supernatural story I've read on this site (I'm into supernatural fantasy crap, vertigo is an exception), but I hope you finish it soon so you can write the second book for this one. I don't wanna wait! But I guess I have to. Ugh cliff hangers and seriously amazing writers!
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
Amazing amazing chapter! I love the way you ended it! It's like a cliffie, but at the same time it isn't. I can't wait for the sequel! I love how everything (almost...) sort of came to an agreement... all the situations, I mean. I'm not so sad that this is over though, because I know some things:
1. you'll be working on my favorite story (not that I don't love this one... I just got a bit out of touch with it).
2. There's a nice long sequel waiting for me! :)
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
| WindyStars chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
First off, this is not original work. Twilight made vampires popular, and so many other people branched off of it. You're one of those people. You even made the guy have bright green eyes. Edward from Twilight had gold eyes. See?
| Writing In Ink Forever chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
I was so sad to see this story end.
This Chapter closed the story nicely, and that cliffhanger was mean of you. . I wanna know what happens.
Liam lmao. It shows that he cares for Dahlia.
Omg I thought Callum was going to propose to Dahlia! You got my hopes up! Lol. The ending of the next book or beginning should totally have him proposing to Dahlia. :o Just a suggestion.
Great book! Is this going to be published?
| selenafan621 chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
So far, this story is pretty good, but I think it can get better. By the end of this story, I might do my signature "I love this story" happy dance! ;D
| Lauren Stargazer chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
As soon as I got the email telling me this story was updated, I immediately stopped everything else I was doing (which happened to be a report on a physics lab that I was just finishing up) to read this. Gosh, I was so excited and slightly nervous about how you'd choose to end it, but I see now that I could not have asked for anything better. I loved it. As always, Liam made me laugh out loud and Callum always makes me want to strangle him with hugs.
I'm really glad to hear that there will be a sequel. I'll definitely be reading that one too. So congrats on finishing this lovely story and good luck on all your future projects. Thanks for sharing and keep up the excellent work. :)
| Mahteslover chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
I love this story I can't watt till the sequel ... Please don't take to long!
| gategirl7 chapter 30 . 1/21/2013
I really loved this! I was very appreciative that Dahlia stuck to her guns, and did things her own way. Like Callum said, her independence is a huge part of who she is. And I'm glad they had that conversation at his party - it's good to get that said out loud.
I must say Liam was my favorite. I love his bickering and brutal 'honesty' and his soft inside that he protects by being mean. Maybe something happens for him in the romance department in the sequel?
Thanks so much for finishing this fic and sharing with us. Stellar job!
| ViciouslyDark chapter 29 . 1/17/2013
loved Dahlia shes such a badass!
| R. Ficst chapter 29 . 1/15/2013
AWESOME! Very exciting chapter.
| KML92 chapter 29 . 1/15/2013
WHOOO! Finally! That bitch has been getting on my nerves since I started reading this story. Awesome chapter. I found myself reading faster as the chapter progressed. I enjoyed it very much. Update soon! I HAVE to know what Callum and Liam have to say about this whole thing. Great job!