Reviews for The Deadly Flower
stuck in bed chapter 28 . 1/8/2013
I'm going to rush this review before I jump into bed. Sorry. But I love the whole action in this chapter. Although it was fun to see Callum & Dahlia's relationship develop, I really want to get to the nitty-gritty part of the story. I'm wondering whether Dahlia will learn something new about her powers? & angry Dahlia is pretty awesome.

Only thing: [Oh, yes, I was going to do this.] - shouldn't it be "Oh yes, I was going to do this?" Although I suppose it depends on how you say it.

Can't wait till the next chapter. Oh. & to answer your question. hm. I'm not sure. How long would longer be exactly? And how short would shorter be? I like longer chapters because I always feel that not much happens in shorter ones - though that's unlikely in your case.

BUT ONLY ABOUT THREE CHAPTERS? :OOO On the bright side, you'll soon be able to list this story as complete & I'm sure that'll feel satisfying :)
Lethaldoze chapter 27 . 1/4/2013
Wow, I just finished reading this chapter! I couldn't get the time to read anything for the last couple of days! Sorry for this looooooooonnnnng overdue review!
I loved the Dahlia and Liam conversation at the end the best! Liam has it baaadd!
I'll get to your next chapter asap!
Amy90 chapter 28 . 1/3/2013
Wow, that's really reckless! I'm sure the boys will rip her apart for that stunt. :D
Can't wait to read the next chapter!

I've one big request though:

Don't. Kill. Liam. ;)
Amy90 chapter 22 . 1/3/2013
Lian is cool. And I think he already got a mayor role in the story, so I'm happy as it is. Although it might be nice, once Callum's story is told, to tell an own story about Liam... ;)
Guest chapter 28 . 1/1/2013
Love this chapter! Looking forward to the next!
Guest chapter 28 . 12/29/2012
if you are going to keep taking forever to upload, i'd suggest long chapters. No pressure though
Rose 5936 chapter 28 . 12/29/2012
Amazing chapter :D It would be awesome if u could make the chapters longer and maybe have more dahlia and callum alone scenes but i understand if its not possible just please dont shorten them! Thanks
mahtes chapter 28 . 12/28/2012
Longer chapters please unless u update quicker
MissColly chapter 28 . 12/26/2012
Ohh I can't wait for the next chapter now! Although, I don't mind if you update a little late because I prefer longer chapters :P
Feeling a little sad about the story getting to an end, I'll miss it greatly! But I know that all stories come to an end, except this'll be a story that I'll never forget. Enjoy the rest of your holiday too! :)
Desert Illusion chapter 28 . 12/24/2012
LONG chapters, please! :) Short ones are annoying in my opinion, and then we all have to wait for another update. Long chapters satisfy the crave of reading more of Callum and Liam ;) hahah! But that's just me. Anyways...please update soon!
whisperedcares chapter 28 . 12/23/2012
Seriously adore this story. Oh, and I'm super happy you weren't offended with my constructive criticism. My sister never takes it well, so I started to think I was doing it very wrong.
I'm EXTREMELY excited for the action packed, most likely followed by a angry Callum/Liam for doing something reckless, couple of chapters. And of course I like badass girl characters who don't act all woes is me, need-a-man to do anything character. They are refreshing and well loved in my archives. A lot!
Your Avid Reader,
HighOnAirGurl chapter 28 . 12/23/2012
I love Dahlia so much. She's no wimp. lol. I lurve this story and I don't want it to end, so I vote for shorter chapters!
HighOnAirGurl chapter 27 . 12/23/2012
Exhilarating chapter. It had everything - action, suspense, Callum and Dahlia moments, Liam and Dahlia moments... you are the best. Loved it!
Fiery Dancer chapter 28 . 12/22/2012
Go dahlia! And longer chapters! Unless you post really quickly ;) oh and happy holidays!
KrazyFrog100 chapter 28 . 12/22/2012
Boy oh boy, I just love how you lead up to action sequences. You are the master of action on FP, just sayin'.

Callum and Dahlia's alone time was really sweet and well-done. Love those two together. The moment with Liam was great too.

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