Reviews for The Deadly Flower
KML92 chapter 13 . 12/21/2012
Nonexistant writing skills? Are you insane? You have some of the best writing skills I've ever seen. As I've said before, your attention to detail is amazing. I find myself captivated by your story and it wouldn't be so easy to become engulfed within the words if you had nonexistant wrtiting skills. Amazing chapter. I still freaking love Callum. I'm a little disappointed he woudn't walk her up to her room, though I suppose I understand the reason for that. Still loving this story, if you haven't figured that out already. Awesom job!
KML92 chapter 12 . 12/21/2012
Awe, that was so cute. I love his little place he calls his own. That's an original idea I have never encountered in a vampire story before. Trust me, I've read a lot of vampire stories. I'm a little bit obsesses with them, I guess you could say. Amazing chapter! Greay job!
KML92 chapter 11 . 12/21/2012
What the hell took him so long to come to her rescue?! I think I like Ophelia. I pretty much hate the rest of them that were introduced in this chapter. Thantos got exactly what he deserved and I LOVED Dahlia's empty threat with the silver bullets. Priceless. Great job!
KML92 chapter 10 . 12/21/2012
Hmmm...I think I like Liam a little more than before...I bet he becomes a good friend to her throughout this whole thing. I'm so excited! Callum marked her to protect her! He's hoping that if he's claimed her as his then she'll be left alone! That's so sweet! Great chapter. I love this story so far!
KML92 chapter 9 . 12/21/2012
OOh! I gun! I love it! This is going to be interesting. Jealousy does not look good on Will. I still don't like him, but I absolutely LOVE Callum! He's soooooo amazing! Great chapter!
Nikki Nix chapter 28 . 12/21/2012
It will be sad to see it end, but I know all good stories must come to an end. I'm excited to see how Dahlia is going to handle Lilynn. And I prefer long chapters.
FamishedNight chapter 28 . 12/20/2012
Awesome chapter! I hope she kills her . just saying.
KML92 chapter 8 . 12/20/2012
I love Callum. He's so sweet. I'm kind of disappointed. I was hoping she would deck that dude that was hitting on her. Awesome chapter. I have to go to bed now before I fall asleep at my computer, but I WILL be back tomorrow! Awesome chapter. Can't wait to read more!
KML92 chapter 7 . 12/20/2012
I knew Callum would come for her! OMG I was reading this chapter so fast with excitement as to what was coming. Good job. This is an amazing story so far and I'm not even halfway through it! Excellent job.
KML92 chapter 6 . 12/20/2012
Well that's not good. Where's her new vampire friend when she needs him. Some friend Veronica is. I can't believe she just left her there no matter what the consequences would have been. Good chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
junebird28 chapter 28 . 12/20/2012
Awesome amazing chapter! I really love the interactions between dahlia and callum. They make a really great couple. I feel like longer chapters are better, unless you'd be able to update faster with shorter chapters. It's ultimately your creative genius, so you decide. Very good though. I'm just hoping liam doesn't have a thing for her...

Ah well. Update soon!
voodoomaschine chapter 28 . 12/20/2012
Lovely and charming! Dahlia seemed to be on the verge of kicking asses and taking names! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, thank you for the update! And! In my personal preference, shorter chapters makes for a longer story (wouldn't be over so soon, you know?).

Please continue!

KML92 chapter 5 . 12/20/2012
WHAT!? Who was waiting for her! Damn! I can't read the next chapter right now! I can't wait to see what happens! Great chapter.
KML92 chapter 4 . 12/20/2012
Liam's an ass too. I would have smacked him. Not that that would have been business like or anything. I'm just sayin. Good chapter. Your names for your characters are interesting. I've never heard of most of them. Liam is about the only one I've ever heard before. I'm extremely positive that Callum is the guy that was with her the night she was stabbed and also the one who carried her to the hospital. I also believe the reason he wanted to meet her at 8 at night is becasue he's a vampire and can't go out during the day. Those are my guesses. :-) Good job.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 28 . 12/20/2012
Amazing chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! I'm glad you didn't leave it on a cliffie, because I'd be angry then. XD
I think in this case, longer chapters would be nice... well, it would be over quicker for the readers so we wouldn't always be in suspense.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
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