|Reviews for The Deadly Flower|
| Licorice Tears chapter 10 . 7/30/2013
So, I saw this story here a few months ago, though it looked interesting, read the first chapter, and went nuh-uh, no. And then I read it a few weeks later, made it to chapter3, and went, no. No.
And then I took another stab at it today, and now I'm reading it, and I can't understand why I disliked this story before. Really. It's wonderful. I love that the protagonist is no pushover, and that a plot actually exists, though there are still hints of relationship. I don't even mind the slight clichedness of the prophecy and letalis flower-thing.
I am SO glad I decided to read this.
| Guest chapter 22 . 7/18/2013
Yeah, why can't they just fly? I get that it's over the city and they don't want to expose themselves, but my goodness, when compared with the alternatives, I would take that risk!
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/17/2013
Hi Carmel March, big fan of your writing! I loved the prologue of this story and how you've developed the character so far. Do you mind me being a bit picky about the hospital scene? We try to discharge patients as soon as we can, and a nurse would bring the discharge papers to the patient's room. If a patient really wants to go but they aren't ready, we can't legally keep them, so they can leave "against medical advice" but otherwise we are trying to get them out of there so that we will 1) be reimbursed by insurance, and 2) free up hospital beds.
| xxxheartlandxxx chapter 18 . 7/16/2013
Liam is awesome! He makes me laugh. Another great chapter!
| xxxheartlandxxx chapter 17 . 7/16/2013
Oooh Callum just kissed her! Awww...And I love this chapter! I'm glad things are getting a little more action-y. It's safe to say I'm addicted!
| xxxheartlandxxx chapter 13 . 7/16/2013
Awwww that little moment was so cute! I loved this chapter!
| xxxheartlandxxx chapter 11 . 7/16/2013
I loved this chapter!
| xxxheartlandxxx chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
I liked it! It's very well-written.
| Lyonheart91 chapter 30 . 6/4/2013
Oh my gosh, I loved this story. It was so well written, you really are a very talented author.
| Guest chapter 29 . 5/5/2013
woooooow love this ! thats all I got to saay !1! :)
| CoConutella chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
I just finished reading this whole stoy (at work lol). I LOVE IT! jesus Callum is the ultimate wet dream 3 but more importantly, I really love your writing style. It's very clear and concise and definetly full of presence. This is by far my favorite vampire story on fiction press and the best one as well :] Keep it up! I can't wait for the sequel but for now I will go on to entertain myself with Vertigo 3333 (you're so awesome! 3)
| mylittleprincess chapter 30 . 4/18/2013
| mk chapter 30 . 4/8/2013
I absolutely loved the story! Every single part of it...the ending was amazing...the characters wow! Congratulation! It was amazing!
| MileyRowling chapter 30 . 3/18/2013
This is one of the best stories I've read on here. I"m really glad I have an account now so I can favorite stories like this!
| Lethaldoze chapter 30 . 3/6/2013
Okay, sequel coming sooner or later, I don't care. I'm just glad there will be a sequel. Cause honestly it would be hard to part with this story.
I was wondering, will Dahlia remain human?
Anyway...i loved every bit and every moment of this story. Callum's confession was splendid and loved how he said he liked the independent part of Dahlia and that he would 'deal with it'.
This story had one of the best female vampire story characters ever. Because most vampire stories I read, the female lead is most of the time without a backbone. Dahlia was a breath of fresh air in that sense!
Loved the story.
I'll be waiting for the sequel!