Reviews for Dancing With an Open Heart
shadowpreistess chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
I love this one what was your inspiration
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
It is very hard to look inside your own heart at times. Good job show that.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
"Realizing that they won’t part

and their souls can’t be bought."

I think it would make the rhythm better if you changed "won't" and "can't" to "will not" and "cannot". Also in the last stanza "difficult" might be better for the flow of it. IMO.

Otherwise, I like.

:Isabella May:
mgs chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Aww, this is a nice sweet poem.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
Interesting. A lot to think about. Having an open heart is important, but you also have to make sure you know who you are. I think this was really good. Great job, and God bless.
Which Mistake am I chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
I like this.