Reviews for Heart Made of Stone
Amanda chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
amazing use of description, very very very well done
darkgurl92 chapter 11 . 8/9/2008
omg..it's so sad..she lost the baby...

update soon..
IheartStewart20 chapter 11 . 1/7/2008
That's terrible she lost the baby! How sad. :( But maybe this is a blessing in disguise? God works in mysterious ways. Or what/whoever you believe in.

And just who is this Eric, eh? A strapping young man? Handsome? Wealthy? Kindhearted? Hm... loved the updates! More soon!
IheartStewart20 chapter 9 . 1/3/2008
You ARE evil! How's she gonna feed and care for the baby if she doesn't have any money? Or a place to stay? These are questions that need answering, little lady! But I love this anyways. Can't wait for more! Holla!
IheartStewart20 chapter 8 . 12/26/2007
I really like this! That Andrew is a dog. Poo on him. I sympathize with Collette. Poor girl. But I hope these cramps don't mean what I think they do. More soon!
cinnamon-24 chapter 3 . 12/8/2007
This story should be T
A Catholic Girl chapter 8 . 12/7/2007
amazingly amazing..it's going to my favorite stories list.
Viv26 chapter 5 . 11/6/2007
This is a wonderful story, please update soon!
keeping the moon chapter 7 . 10/28/2007
i would be very interested in being your idea proofer or perhaps part-time co-writer. i think this story has a lot of potential, it just needs a bit more groundwork to lay out the plot. if you're willing, send me an email to describe what your thoughts on the story where and character backround and such. i love the time-setting you put it in, and i love doing research on different era's, so if you need any help, just let me know. XD

Nicely Done.
V de V chapter 6 . 10/24/2007
Hm, interesting story idea. It has potential, but at the moment it is kind of simple. What I mean to say is that it can be flushed out more or developed further. I like the fact you have a Russian girl in a post-Depression American household. That does not happen too often. And depending on where you set the story-like New York or California-you have some options. I would be happy to be your "idea proofer," though co-writing would not work. I have a feeling our writing styles would clash too much. Let me know.

Hope Europe is fun. I would love to go where you are touring. Ciao.

V.V.
tiffany chapter 2 . 10/13/2007
i don't get it what did he take from collette? did he rape her?

the plot is very interesting! update again soon!
AnnaChase chapter 5 . 4/6/2007
WOW! I love love love this story! I've been looking for a story like this for AGES and you're writing it, good job! Please don't forget about the story or something and update real soon ;). The nausea.. is she pregnant or just ill? Can't wait for more!
ind-fam chapter 5 . 4/5/2007
A Increase the length

B What happened in the afternoon to turn her off.

C Where is Part 2 Chapter 1?

D Build on the atmosphere.

Keep writing...
ind-fam chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
DiD he take her heart or her virtue. You are good writer. But you need to increase the length of the chapters.

keep writing...
Tuiki chapter 4 . 4/1/2007
Very nice for the fourth chapter. Continue Please!
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