| Reviews for Fred, Ned, Ted, and along the way Gilbert |
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   hunterxstrawhat chapter 1 . 3/4/2007 A rabbit working in the stock market ... it's good. A few awkward sentences, but most stories do. Keep up the good work - |
| Writing my page chapter 1 . 2/28/2007 bunnies...AWSOME it was good butbut this sentance(Ted crept over to a branch that was right over Ted’s head) didtn make sense.. but otherwise GOOD |
| Joanna Johnson chapter 1 . 2/28/2007 LOL! I luv your story already,especially since I luv bunnie rabbits! You have a great plot and it's very well written. I would only suggest seperating when the brothers talk. ie. "Hi Ted," said Ned. "Hello, Ned," said Ted. or something like that. |