Reviews for Reversed
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
This my friend, is brilliant!
Xriny chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
wow, VERY nice, i liked it so much i don't really know what to say
abandoned and forgotten chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
Dark theme; I'm very familiar with this particular topic: it fits right in with the way I've been thinking lately. Your writing is spectacular and the way you captured the scene and its emotion is truly captivating.
rebellious spirit chapter 1 . 4/7/2007
this is so wonderful, love it, love it , love it.

are you sure you are 14?

i like the confusion in the is so nice.

Toxic.Industrial.Waste chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
I love this!

Does not sound as if it from a 14-year-old at all!


It made me want to read in fast pace and try to keep up.

Like the world around me was spinning too fast & I had to read this poem in order for it to stop!

Beautiful rhythm.

It flows just perfectly.

But, not in the fairy tail way.

In the I-want-to-die type way.

Amazing, amazing job.

Erica Sky
SnackySnackSnackSnackSnack chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
I love this one! I've never read anything like it.
Living.My.Life.My.Way chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
Dragracingqueen chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
I really, REALLY, REALLY liked this one... It's deep...and definently one to add to a favorites list. I cannot really describe what I am even wanting to say. Shall I say wow?

how bout that. For lack of better words, Wow.
Kyubak chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
Bloody hell, that was just plain awesome!

Good luck!
commemorativemisery chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
holy mf jesus this is the best thing u have ever written!
alluring lies chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
love. love. love it.

beautiful work!~

the way everything flowed was just so beautiful.
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
I really love the line, "The silence is too loud" I love how it is counterdickting but ture. Idk, I just love lines like this. Great poem!
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
wow...this makes me think jumbled...i hopw thats what you where going for...
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 3/1/2007
this is great. I loved how it goes!
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
Surreal. I love it!

-Izzie May