|Reviews for Silly Vacationspanish and english|
| disabled account chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
This literally caused me to make a convulsive "HA!" while I was sitting at my computer. I'm the sort of person who WILL laugh at a joke because of its sheer stupidity or illogic so I suppose this worked quite well for me. I commend your arbitrariness for posting this little tidbit on fictionpress - it provides an outlet for all of us who are learning Spanish in class, and enjoy it. Plus, I learned a couple of new words. :) However, I agree with the other reviewer that "Every day I fell out of the tree" definitely needs to be changed to the imperfect tense (which typically follows such phrases as "todos los dias"). Which reminds me - "las dias" should be "los dias." Adios - Kat.
| antigonelives chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
Not bad and imaginative, but, in some places, you need to use the imperfect tense instead of the preterite (if you did an action for an extended period of time in the past, like you fell out of the tree every day or it was ongoing).