This was really beautiful writing and a really beautiful oneshot. So sad, but I love the metaphors to chocolate. A really good oneshot; I absolutely adore. I'm going to go add it to my c2 now. (:

aw this was a cute one-shot... like that stuff that seiko did.. but then really depressing.. ( how she couldnt tell him and in the end he found someone else...

AHH! No...I'm so sad

I have to say...this is depressing, but your writing is brilliant.

omg. that is so heartbreaking. dayyum. lol. but i loved it all the same. you write well. :]

Cute, very cute. A few mistakes here and there but, for the most part, it was pretty good.

That was really well written, and I love the whole idea of it all. Although, the ending was not exactly happy, I still enjoyed it very much.

oh goodness.

your story is perfect. I have to admit that I was expecting a happy ending, but I guess that this one is much better. is your story angsty? definitely. is it good? mhm. ))

Aw, that was really cute. And really sad. Very good writing.

Gauh. It was such a sad ending but I can't help but adore it anyway. Lovely story, very angsty but romantic.

oh... thats so sad/sweet/unpredictable/amazing/wow.

OMG! wow...that was amazing! completely tugged at the heart stings! wow...so completely real! i really loved this because of that fact...its so real...could actually happen...actually does happen...so sad! keep writing!

aw

awesome :D

tragic endings always the best

oh my god...that was so beautiful. So sad and beautiful...do you think there will be a follow-up? i half wish there would and wouldn't be since I want to see them together but...some things are better just as they are (many disney movies are great examples) not to say that you would ruin this (because i'm absolutely sure you wouldn't) but...I hope you know what I mean. You're a wonderful author.