Reviews for Chocolate
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
This was really beautiful writing and a really beautiful oneshot. So sad, but I love the metaphors to chocolate. A really good oneshot; I absolutely adore. I'm going to go add it to my c2 now. (:
x3life chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
aw this was a cute one-shot... like that stuff that seiko did.. but then really depressing.. ( how she couldnt tell him and in the end he found someone else...
emotionless-stares chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
AHH! No...I'm so sad
BlorangeForever chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
I have to say...this is depressing, but your writing is brilliant.
Katie Valentine chapter 1 . 9/2/2007
omg. that is so heartbreaking. dayyum. lol. but i loved it all the same. you write well. :]
BlackPetal chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Cute, very cute. A few mistakes here and there but, for the most part, it was pretty good.
mer-person chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
That was really well written, and I love the whole idea of it all. Although, the ending was not exactly happy, I still enjoyed it very much.
loves him chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
oh goodness.

your story is perfect. I have to admit that I was expecting a happy ending, but I guess that this one is much better. is your story angsty? definitely. is it good? mhm. ))
Girl On A Strawberry Swing chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
Aw, that was really cute. And really sad. Very good writing.
Salt and Vinegar Pringles chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
Gauh. It was such a sad ending but I can't help but adore it anyway. Lovely story, very angsty but romantic.
Pyrgus chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
oh... thats so sad/sweet/unpredictable/amazing/wow.
coffeegirl123 chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
OMG! wow...that was amazing! completely tugged at the heart stings! completely real! i really loved this because of that fact...its so real...could actually happen...actually does sad! keep writing!
LornaNess chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
MetiWriter chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
awesome :D

tragic endings always the best
Azzizarukas chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
oh my god...that was so beautiful. So sad and you think there will be a follow-up? i half wish there would and wouldn't be since I want to see them together but...some things are better just as they are (many disney movies are great examples) not to say that you would ruin this (because i'm absolutely sure you wouldn't) but...I hope you know what I mean. You're a wonderful author.
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