|Reviews for Swallow Me into an Obsession|
| VanillaOreo chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
This is exactly how I feel about someone! I can't stop thinking about him, and I had a dream about him last night. This was a really sweet poem.
| openmouthblues chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
*looks at own palms* Hmm. Nicely done.
I like the wording, and the part about tatooing the palms. That line jumped out at me, and I loved it.
It's always nice to have an overpowering line near the middle that will make the poem stick in your head.
| Fan Fan chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
| Faith Lee chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
'I'd let my heart bleed for this love.'
I find this line true for me as well.