Reviews for Swallow Me into an Obsession
VanillaOreo chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
This is exactly how I feel about someone! I can't stop thinking about him, and I had a dream about him last night. This was a really sweet poem.
openmouthblues chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
*looks at own palms* Hmm. Nicely done.

I like the wording, and the part about tatooing the palms. That line jumped out at me, and I loved it.

It's always nice to have an overpowering line near the middle that will make the poem stick in your head.

Icicle Tears
Fan Fan chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
Lovely :)
Faith Lee chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
Powerful.

'I'd let my heart bleed for this love.'

I find this line true for me as well.

*favourites :)