the dashes annoyed me, but i loved the poem... nice job.

your 14? i'm almost 14 as well... just a month or so and i will be

Thoughtful and very well written. I liked the way you summed up the end. I think this may even deserve two cookies...Hm, maybe. :o)

Beautifully done!

Best Wishes!

TSP

Very well written... A hidden message hidden 'within' it all. I liked the little bit of the poem where you inserted your own columns. Interesting. I like columns, but FP is...stupid. It won't let you...nice touch.

I liked the wording, and like how you ended it.

It really wrapped it up.

Bravo.

Icicle Tears

This was an excellently written poem! I don't normally like poems, but I thoroughly enjoyed this piece!