Reviews for The Beast
lastwrites chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
the dashes annoyed me, but i loved the poem... nice job.

your 14? i'm almost 14 as well... just a month or so and i will be
Vinnie K chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
Thoughtful and very well written. I liked the way you summed up the end. I think this may even deserve two cookies...Hm, maybe. :o)
radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
Beautifully done!

Best Wishes!

openmouthblues chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
Very well written... A hidden message hidden 'within' it all. I liked the little bit of the poem where you inserted your own columns. Interesting. I like columns, but FP is...stupid. It won't let you...nice touch.

I liked the wording, and like how you ended it.

It really wrapped it up.


Icicle Tears
Skye Hegyes chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
This was an excellently written poem! I don't normally like poems, but I thoroughly enjoyed this piece!