Reviews for Pretending to Believe
Camelopardis chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
I like this poem. It's very simple, but at the same time it's pretty deep. I feel the same way as you when i go to temple, so I know exactly where you're coming from.

Tieka
MirrorMirrorOnTheWall chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
wow. i like it. i think that it is true for some people. i dont go to church, so i really cant relate all that well, but i think that it is a good poem, with a good flow.
olivia chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
So...don't go? Really, this poem is as artufl as "I went to the store today. I needed some milk. There were people there, and I bought it and went home."

It really doesn't accomplish anything.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
Sad... Don't pretend. Good work.

IM
Bri Neves chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
I think lots of people can relate to this.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
This is sad. I'm sorry that you are forced into something you don't believe. No one can give faith to you. You have to find it for yourself. Good job.
unspecified chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
wow..that's deep...why do you go to church if you don't believe. did something happen to turn you away from your faith...or..what?
Which Mistake am I chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
I really like this. And the thing is that i can see you doing it to. Good Job! This is a good one.