As always, fantastic job. I like how you're keeping the lighthearted parts in there as everything is becoming more and more complex. Keep up the amazing work, and update soon!

~Carm~

This chapter wasn't as interesting as the others. At least the end wasn't. But the beginning was really good.

Nice! It was funny too. really good.

Lovely. I'm really liking the direction this story is going in. And the characters seem to be developing even more. Their feelings and emotions are changing and emerging, making them more realistic, believable characters. Very nicely done :) Update as soon as you can!

~carm~

Wonderful chapter. It really displayed your talent for storytelling and your expertise with dialogue. This story is simply amazing :)

~carm~

Hmm. There are so many words to describe this chapter. Words like suburb, wonderful, fantastic, excellent, super duper, great, perfection, and, my personal favourite, groovy. What I think I'm trying to say is...I loved it and I can't wait for more!

~carM~

Excellent chapter! I loved it! Thanks for updating so soon :) Hope to see more!

~carm~

YAY! You updated! I was so happy when I saw the alert in my inbox :) Awesome chapter, by the way! I loved it! Can't wait for more!

~carm~

Hello hello! More wonderful chapters! This story is amazing. I loved the scooby-doo bandaid line. Hehe! I laughed merely thinking about it :) Keep it up!

~carm~

Hey! Excellent first chapter! I like it and I can't wait for more! Update soon!

~carm~