|Reviews for concealed affection|
| she smolders chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
This is just beautiful because there's such honesty in your words that makes me want to know the narrator of your poem because she reminds me a lot of myself. We all have doubts and hopes and dreams and that special someone will never know that. Take care.
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
Okay. Ireally loved this one. I just plain out love how you wrote it. GREAT WORK!
| DemonicTruths chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Aww, it sucks that he doesn't notice you. I love how you end the poem.
| imbeciru chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
SIMPLY LOVE. DAMN YOU.
the last lines.
. Y O U .
| Bri Neves chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
Aw...I like that. I can relate. _